| Reviews for Torn |
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Guest chapter 9 . 2/1/2019 Love this story! Please keep updating! |
Naabal chapter 9 . 3/28/2014 Will Jim appear? I really liked the John x Jim thing going on. |
umjily chapter 8 . 11/18/2013 i love your story so much ! can't wait to read more . hope you add Peter Pan and Wendy into it 3 |
Miranda Dowd chapter 7 . 9/7/2013 Yikes, Ariel planning to kill Eric? Didn't see that one coming. Your story is interesting so far; I hope you will update soon. |
CC chapter 7 . 9/6/2013 Aww, I ship ArielxEric and I don't picture her being like that! Oh well, that's the only thing I have to criticize, because Ariel has been my favorite princess since I was a baby, soooooo... Yeah. But that is just me. I absolutely love your story and how all the characters are friends. Please update! |
thewriterforever87 chapter 6 . 8/31/2013 Snow and Ferdinand are just.. Asdjkfl they're so cute! I would love to see how they got together. Cindy and charming are also really adorkable. Thank you for writing this story! |
El Ohkin chapter 6 . 7/3/2013 HAHA. FLUFFY! Write more please! |
Guest chapter 6 . 6/28/2013 Love your story so far. Looking forward to the next post . . . |
Anonymous chapter 6 . 6/28/2013 I love reading your story! Keep it up! And I can't wait for the ball... |
umjily chapter 6 . 6/28/2013 Im so glad you updated! I really like this story! (: please update soon. |
Searching For Wonderland chapter 1 . 4/25/2013 Hey Avril! I am so sorry my review was cut short! Last night i had been writing and I had been half asleep, so I guess I didn't even notice that I posted it? Anyways here's my full review to this wonderful story! I really enjoyed how it all came in together. The way you meshed the characters so perfectly is a real talent! It's not an easy thing to do especially since the characters can be a bit two dimensional at times? I mean don't get me wrong. They all have their depth in their character but it's also a very tricky thing to do? Anyways you did an amazing job with this, and something I just loved is the way you portrayed Cinderella. She's a lot more fierce in this story! She's brave and isn't afraid to give her opinion. She's certainly no damsel in distress but she's also mildly aware of her "servant" status. She's the perfect heroine in this story and I cannot wait to see how you continue with this! Something else I liked is Snow White's little plot point. Her and Ferdinand make quite the couple! They're really cute but I like Charming & Cinderella a lot more for some reason? Maybe it's because I feel just a tad bit more attached to the realistic couple? I mean don't get me wrong Avril, I simply love the fairy tale romance? I mean who doesn't! But to be honest Cinderella & Charming's romance is looking much more fairy tale then Snow & Ferdinand. Which is ironic... Oh and another thing I found cute was the little John/Pocahontas subplot you got going on here. Frankly it feels a little weird not having John and Jim together, especially in one of your stories but hey, if you're going for something a little different - then by all means continue! Either way I'm sure it'll be great :) Seeing Jasmine and Aladdin together felt extremely nostalgic. They're perfect and I can't get enough of them! As a little personal note - I'd love it if Ariel somehow made a small little cameo into the all the madness? But that's just me :) Anyways keep up the amazing work, I cannot wait to see what else you have in store! And once again I am so sorry for the poor excuse of a review I gave you last night! I feel so embarrassed right now XD Update soon Avril! As always your work is phenomenal! |
Searching For Wonderland chapter 5 . 4/24/2013 Hey Avril! So my reviews going to be a bit short since it's late and I'm exhausted - promise my next one will be longer! But anyways I really enojyed reading these chapters and I love what you've done with the story! It's realistic to a p |
El Ohkin chapter 5 . 4/22/2013 KAWAII ALL OVER THIS CHAPTER. WRITE MORE PLEASE! |
umjily chapter 5 . 4/22/2013 Aww poor Charming :( i cant wait to see whats gonna happen at the ball ... (: |
El Ohkin chapter 4 . 4/21/2013 SWEET! KEEP WRITING! |