great chapter update soon

I couldn’t finish past the fourth chapter, I’m not flaming but there’s no timeline or discovery of his powers or his creature side he flashes his fangs after telling Ritsu that he isn’t as weak as he looks... where did he get fangs? I know it’s a creature fic but what’s his creature there’s no mention of it except him being a submissive

Cool

I LOVE IT

so good

Thanks for sharing your writing.

great story!

This story was great, just hard to follow, and the sex scene came out of absolutely nowhere. I’m not saying it was bad, but I still would’ve liked to see more of their relationship development. One thing I noticed, when people write stories with a letter from Gringotts with abilities on it, it seems like they just add abilities off the top of their head, they never show him using all of them, just some. There were also so spelling mistakes that were kind of bugging me, but I absolutely loved your story despite the way I’m probably making this sound. Keep writing, you have a talent for it.

Just wondering, what year is he in?

Wow me encanto

So this is abandoned?

I loved your story! It could have more fleshing out of the relationship between the characters and their interactions with each other.

the story was good but the flow of it was really bad.
It was confusing how the story would change in the middle without any explanation.
there were no moments between kyoka harry and umehito that would explain how harry fell in love with them much less as to why he allowed them to have sex with them. there wasn't even any complete scenes between harry and the host club.
and i don't know if someone noticed it or not but Ritsu seems to have disappeared after harry left his home even though harry called him his best Ritsu i feel sorry for him he was forgotten by his best friend.

Harry doesn't need to use glamours if he has the metamorphmagus mimic jewelry. Knickers are panties.

Harry doesn't need to use glamours if he has the metamorphmagus mimic jewelry. Knickers are panties.