Reviews for Giving up |
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DelennTriesTalkingLikeAHuman chapter 1 . 8/16/2019 Very good. |
TBLWSP chapter 1 . 6/21/2013 Excellent story. Like the action and suspense. |
Edhla chapter 1 . 4/27/2013 Wow, this is a terribly grim little fic. Quite taken by the detail of the thumb-sized hole, yikes. I did think perhaps this might play better as a longer chapter with stronger characterisation and more detail, and there were some minor SPaG issues that, if corrected, might improve this immensely. Nice work x |