Okay, what the HELL is this "Thing". You didn't give enough description to explain, nor did you ever actually say what it was.

Total cotton candy! Such fluffy sweeteness. The first paragraph was a little hard to read - structure issues but once you got past that plastic wrapping, it was all goodness.

OMiGawd. This has to be the CUTEST fic I've ever read. Definatly one for the favourites.