I really liked the story! But just a few things I think you should work on: I found a few spelling mistakes here and there, even though I don't really mind all that much, try reading back and fix the ones you find. It makes it easier to read. Try to be a tad more literate, it makes a story more enjoyable. I would've loved to hear a bit more from France just to make it more interesting. Try to keep your options open for that stuff to make it even better. Again, I really liked the story and I'm not trying to be mean. I'm just trying to help you improve you're writing skills. 3

I love stories wherein France is actually a trusted friend instead of a pervert or whatever. Great story!

Whoa, talk about drama! Romano you stupid tsundere! If you had just told Spain you loved him none of this would have happened! And even though Spain is a bit OOC, I can see it happening. *evil grin* No one expected the Spanish Inquisition. *evil laugh*

I LOVED the story! So cute! And I am so happy that you didn't make France a rapist! I am eternally grateful!