Reviews for The Cracks That Show
Guest chapter 29 . 7/11
What a cliffhanger! It's been over a year since you last posted. I hope you will return to complete this story as it has been getting more exciting with each chapter. Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/11
Hmm hermione being her usual annoying pushy self. I hope she learns not to be so selfishly entitled after this.
Jopru chapter 29 . 6/4
Ok just re-read this story. One of my absolute favorites. So sorry you haven't updated. Unsure of your reasons, but do understand. After losing a loved one in 2008, I haven't written since

~jo~
Guest chapter 29 . 5/24
Amazing story but like it's been a year and half! Update please!
Emouchet59940 chapter 29 . 5/14
jusque là, c'est une très bonne histoire J'attends la suite avec impatience
lilashannah chapter 29 . 4/17
great story! I hope you update soon. I'd love go see what happens at the will reading.
IloveHeat chapter 29 . 12/12/2019
Dang. I knew you quit but I was hoping for the big explosion first
Neeshack chapter 29 . 12/8/2019
Great story so far. Good job. Looking forward to reading more soon.
Guest chapter 19 . 10/1/2019
I would have expected Bill to check the food harry has been given to check it for love potion.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/30/2019
Three chapters of abuse. That's not what was promised in your summary. If there's another chapter like this i'm giving up.
lipasnape chapter 29 . 8/16/2019
I wonder if this great plan that goblins and dead family know about went any further than announcement. You don't know where this is going? Pity. I was looking forward to the bad guys getting what is coming to them.
aresthegodofwar chapter 29 . 8/1/2019
are you going to finish it
Pixie8859 chapter 1 . 7/8/2019
My mother always told me if you can't say anything good day nothing at all...nothing at all.
lovethelab chapter 29 . 7/5/2019
I just found your story and have read it straight through. I really enjoyed it and I hope to see a new chapter soon. Thank you!
KARIMA chapter 1 . 5/31/2019
Your story Fucking boring too slow and thank god you didn't finished it actually that's a big a favours for us so thank and no thank stop writing please for a sake
568 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »