Hey! Your story is great. There are only few fanfics that catches so much of my attention and the subject you've chosen is also great but I've noticed that you haven't been continuing this story for a while. Hope you can get back to it and finish it. Waiting for an update bro.️

If I guess I would say that Giovanni will kidnapp Misty’s sisters. I don’t know what will happen but if Misty die Ash could end with Melody. In order to avoid showing the tipical happy ending. Saludos desde Argentina ! Please update

I don’t know if you will update some day but in my humble opinion you should make Ash have feelings for Melody too. We need more drama

Are you continuing this story? I know it's been a long time, but it's so good that I hope you do. Hehe

Continue pleeeeeease? I miss this story so much
I hope you're doing well

Hi! 3

You've been gone for a while but I do HOPE you finish this amazing and absolutely breathtaking story once day! Take all the time you need and I get that life can get busy but when you are ready to write it again I'm still be around checking! (I also subscribed to this so when you update I'll know!). Gosh, I re read this story over 10 times because it's just that amazing! Honestly I think its the best Pokemon / Pokeshipping FanFic out there and thanks to you the other ones don't live up because yours just ruined all the other fanfics for me! JK :P but I hope you know there are alot of us still rooting for you to finish and still want to read it and are still sticking around eagerly! I hope you're doing well and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter EAGERLY.

Its been sooooo long since you've updated... Plz tell me that you haven't abandoned this wonderfull story...

Can you PLEASE continue this?
I love it!

WHERE. IS. MISTY!

PLEEEEEASE UPDATEEEE!

Omg, I just need to reread this! This is one of the best pokémon fanfics that I've read! You must continue soon! I need to know hiw Team Rocket will do to Misty and how will Ash and Misty relationship will develop!

I have just discovered this story and I really like it. It is fun to see how you make Ash and Misty look like real teenagers trying to figure out their feelings. Especially with all the action going on in the background. I think an abduction and Misty being in danger will do it! ;-)
I hope when they do confess it will be straight to the point. A kiss in the heat of the rescue seems more fitting to Ash and Misty than a lovey dovey speech.

I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Hello.. This is the 1st time I am reviewing.. I can't believe that just yesterday I stumbled across this fic and today I am here, eagerly waiting for a new chapter.. This story has hooked me since the 1st chapter and I wasn't able to put it down.. The story is so well written.. You are an amazing writer and I do hope that You won't abandon this fic.. Keep writing..!

Hello! This is the 1st time I m reviewing. I can't believe that I stumbled across this fic just yesterday and today I am here, eagerly waiting for a new chapter.. You have hooked me since the 1st chapter and I wasn't able to put it down.. The characters and the battles are described perfectly.. U r an amazing writer and I hope that u won't abandon this fic..

Woohoo, it's a new chapter! And indeed, pretty fast ;) Considering your chapters are so long, I'm not really expecting weekly updates, so you're doing nicely (though I'm definitely not against weekly or monthly updates XD).
The Team Rocket Trio are so much fun, it's amusing that they're so proud of having 'captured' Paul XD And I'm sort of afraid that Paul's arrogance is going to be his downfall, he's definitely out of his depth here (though I would be impressed if he did manage to pull it off...). Giovanni seems convinced about Paul's plan, but he put the Trio on the extraction team. Not a smart move, so I think he's suspecting something... Or maybe it's truly a mistake made in the euphoria of having a solid plan, but I'm not going to underestimate Giovanni.
Nope, never mind, I read the next paragraph and Giovanni definitely has a plan. Paul's plan is not going to go as he thinks it'll go, and I have a bad feeling about what's going to happen to Jessie, James and Meowth... I really hope that they end up on the right side and preferably alive as well.
Ah, nice to see the good guys as well, all trying to help Ash and Misty together. Yet with a little help from Brock and some flirting lessons from her sisters Misty seems to have gotten pretty far already. Ash doesn't know what's going to hit him XD I bet there's going to be a girl talk between Misty and Dawn and May when Misty is going to ask for their advice. And you know, I kind of have the feeling that just when Ash and Misty are about to confess or kiss Team Rocket sweeps in, kidnaps Misty, and Ash tries to save her but fails. That'd be drama and Ash would follow right along with Giovanni's plan... Anyway, I suppose I'll have to wait and see.
Thank you very much for updating, I really liked this chapter, I hope you update soon, and keep writing! ! !