No! Fell! Im dead but i will become your personal poltergeist if you do not continue!

can't wait for more!

Hello!

I like your story, I came across it by chance ... I very like it! No! I love it!

I don't understand why there are few people who follow it! Your story is soo great! I love Nemea and Bilbo! It is too endearing/cute!

Ah ah, in addition to enter the heart of the subject, Smaug woke up and will attack Lake City!

I wonder if you're planning to romance for Nemea or whether she will be alone, to care of Bilbo?

Sorry for my English, it's not my native language!

Hehe. Beorn AND a bath... now there's a thought. Hehe.

Anyway, loved the chapter update!

Yay! Loved the interaction with Beorn. Two large predators face off in a few ways.

Hello, I have no quarrel with your story or your writing, on the contrary I admire your skill and you your confidence in posting it too the Internet for anyone to read and enjoy. I would however like to point out that there is an OC main character tag and, given the fact that one of the main characters is most certainly a character you created, it should definitely be a character tag used for your story. Since your OC is a main character not using the OC main character tag says to a reader that this person does not play an integral role in your tale, which is of course far from true. This makes your story harder to find for readers who would like to read a fanficton story with an interesting original character. If they use the search function to look for stories with an OC main character they will be unable to find this story. Inversely if readers are averse to OCs or simply not in the mood to read a fanfic containing one and they decide to use the search function to show stories not tagged with OCs, your story will still show up, which can be frustrating.

That being said I would implore you to keep writing, our world needs more story tellers and imagination, but to please use the main character tag system that has in place. It is there for a reason and makes using this site to read fanfiction much more enjoyable.

Well then, I look forward to the day when you update again after the next Hobbit movie comes out. Cheers! Thanks for writing and posting a great first part of the story!

Well done once again! I found this newest chapter riveting! The only issue I found was one tiny little detail. I'm not sure how many noticed it, but I did. Dori is actually the STRONGEST member of the Company. The book takes the time to make this known. However, this is why I'm not fond of the Movie Dori. They downplay his physical strength and his role as the strongest Dwarf. This, however, is not your fault.

Please note that this tiny little detail does not hurt your story in ANY way and I love your different takes on the battles and scenarios the Dwarves go through and how Nemea and Bilbo face them together. Plus her own personal past and reasons for joining the Quest. I just wanted to point out the mistake to you just in case you did not know. I hope I'm not coming across as hostile. That is not my intention.

Otherwise, like I said, this chapter was exciting and heartfelt. I cannot wait for Nemea to meet Beorn. That is going to be interesting indeed. I further await your next chapter on the edge of my seat!

I really am loving this story! Well done!

Okay, I'm not quite sure why you haven't been getting reviews, because this story is fantastic. I'm a massive Tolkien fan, and the fact that you have managed to sew your story into the fabric without destroying the overall design is amazing, as I see so many fanfictions on here that do that. The concept is a logical one and I like how you have made Nemea (GREAT name choice by the way - I see what you did there ;] ) have her own story, her own pain, her OWN reason why she wants to return to Erebor, not just because Thorin wants to get the kingdom back. I enjoyed in particular the part about the barrow-wights - Jackson sadly left them out of the films, but hey, you did it justice. I will read this story through to the end. I sincerely hope you continue this through the entire Hobbit novel. I'm usually not one for AU stories, but with this one, I honestly wouldn't mind because your writing is astounding. I do have one question to ask though - is there going to be any romance? Fili reminds me very much of a lion ;] (hint hint) Please continue with this awesome story!

With all due respect,

Alex

and here I though she was a dragon!
but a lioness? awesome!

quick question...that moment at the forest, did you make it? or is in the books?
'cuase I haven't read them and not remember something like this in the movie
if it is original then it's awesome!

YESSS but thorin being little jelaous of nemea spoiling bilbo!

Update immediately, please!

Update immediately, please!Update immediately, please!