| Reviews for Captive of Darkness |
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   JadeSlytherin394 chapter 12 . 6/13 I would love to read more |
| theotheroverlander chapter 12 . 5/16 Yes, please. I would really like to see how this plays out, even though you have probably forgotten where exactly this story was going before. PLEASE! |
| Evelyn Rischke chapter 12 . 8/14/2019 yes. just. yes. |
| Sorelina chapter 12 . 7/30/2019 I just found this story, and was happily binge reading it. It has an interesting premise, and I’m curious about where it’s going. I hope you can find the inspiration for more chapters! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/26/2019 I'm interested :) Please continue. |
| Birch chapter 12 . 5/20/2019 Not really. I mean, seriously, did you even go to school? Your grammar is crap, story hard to follow, and plot, though interesting, full of holes. |
| Melodiosa chapter 12 . 4/22/2019 Oh please, can you update? I really like your story. Please please please please please please please please please? |
| Auralia Dawn chapter 5 . 1/27/2019 This is really bad. It has nothing to do with Tony being blind. Your attempts at being mysterious and suspenseful are so forced and seemed as if you didn't want anyone to figure out who the person was prior to the reveal in this chapter. Tony had no reason to be scared of Hammer, the character was way out of character, as is Natasha, Pepper and Bruce. The way you write seems like you watched the Avengers, maybe read the synopsis of other movies or just looked up the characters you are using since you said you didn't even think of Christine Everheart. Do everyone a favour and actually research the characters you are writing about and pre-plan the story before you start publishing because you seriously sound like you are making this up as you go along. *And yes, I am aware this is an old story and the author may never see this, but on the off chance they ever come back to it, I felt I should say something. People like this are so annoying. Also, I have no clue why there are so many positive reviews... unless people have really low standards, but that would only make sense if really good stories had a lot of reviews, and many have twice the amount of chapters and less than a tenth of the reviews* |
| Luzi22 chapter 12 . 9/30/2018 I'd like to see this story's end so please continue |
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/31/2018 Update please! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/10/2018 Update dude! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! ! |
| Scubyrojo26 chapter 12 . 5/7/2018 continue the story please, it's really good and I liked it a lot |
| UnkindWinner07 chapter 12 . 2/22/2018 I would love for this to continue you have so many people wanting you to continue this just like I do! |
| Pandamons chapter 12 . 2/13/2018 I hope you continue this story |
| emily.speelman chapter 12 . 11/24/2017 Write more please! |
