| Reviews for Cake |
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   deathlyHealer chapter 1 . 10/10/2013 That was awkward and adorable and i loved it! Great job :D |
| Hebi R chapter 1 . 9/8/2013 Many kudos ! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2013 Omg! I just LOVE this story! it's one of my favorites! u should really make a sequel 2 this! maybe where him and Mary go 2 Sugar Rush! I cannot wait 2 see what Mary thinks of Sugar Rush and I wonder if she's going 2 make her own kart now that would be something! |
| Ashblossom chapter 1 . 6/21/2013 Nice, well done! I liked the relationship between Ralph and Mary. You did the characters quite well. Thanks for the sweet read! Blossom ツ |
| Makokam chapter 1 . 4/16/2013 Heh. I liked this. Well done. Might have been nice to see more of a reaction from the Nicelanders regarding Calhoun, but I understand that this wasn't about them. It was also interesting to see her missing Ralph, and then have him show up like that. It is kind of odd though, because I figured she was right in assuming that Ralph wouldn't come by because they'd finished the cake. So... -shrug- Still, good story. Makokam out. |
| Miratete chapter 1 . 4/15/2013 That was a delightful little story-sweet and interesting, charmingly fluffy, nicely written, and with some beautiful post-movie action. And I always love stories that give a bit of fleshing-out to minor or flat characters. The Nicelanders are such good territory for that. |
| Rocky Rooster chapter 1 . 4/14/2013 Great fic, having Ralph enjoy baking fits really well and I liked the interactions between Mary and Ralph. There are very few fics out there that have interactions between Ralph and the Nicelanders and I think this one is spot on. |
| dancingRAINBOWS chapter 1 . 4/13/2013 oh goodness! I haven't seen many WIR fanfics with the NIcelander's relationship with Ralph after the movie, but let me just say that this is one heck of a fic with that kind of relationship! I really like how you make the interaction with Ralph and Mary :) and of how this is written! ugh, amazing c: fantastic job, keep it up! :D -dR |
| Dixie Darlin chapter 1 . 4/13/2013 awww that was sweet, I like the idea of Ralph baking in the kitchen since he did seem to enjoy "baking" the go-kart |
| Nagasha chapter 1 . 4/13/2013 D'aww... Really, I should say more, but all I have is D'aww... So have anothe D'aww... D'aww... They're just so... quaint together. You really capture the essence of the era the game was in. And also: D'aww... |
