Why not just appareate

Yeah, not a big fan of this. I'm done :p all the best for the rest of the chapters.

Well, that was unnecessarily rude.

Who thinks he's good? Nah, he knows he is xD man. She's being so condescending to him, did I miss context where it states why she doesn't him?

please update

I don't think Lestrade is THAT well known. maybe because of John's blog, but wouldn't that mark Sherlock as the famous one?

please update this story soon! please!

Why? Why the cliffhanger! Damn it. Please update soon! It's been like a year and I finished this whole thing in a night. Please update or I think I'll go crazy wondering if they die or not or something. Is the whole plan a hoax by Mycoft cuz I could totally see him do this to get them back together cuz no matter how much they seem to annoy each other Sherlock is his little brother. Please update soon!

when i started reading this I quickly fell into it. I liked the characters and how the harry potter ones were brought in. everything seemed to fit okay without to much trouble. then this chapter happened. I dont pretend to know what its like to be a sociopath. So i cant comment on Sherlocks reactions. But just before the golem part Eiric had a massive blow up with Sherlock. hitting him with both barrels and comparing him to her psychotic ex and thanking him for showing her she was about to make a huge mistake before stomping from the room. that is a break up. that is not just a small livers tiff. That requires a serious sit down and conversation to move past and try again. even Sherlock seemed pissed at her comparison. my thought was. "Great now we get a relationship that isnt some picture perfect rid of happiness. its nice to see some realism." then the next section happened. No mention of their argument is brought up. no lingering negative feelings. no heartfelt conversation. nothing. its like the whole thing just never happened. despite the writer then pointing out that Sherlock is still upset with Watson for his part in their fight. its like the author just forgot this massive relationship ending fight happened because by the end of the next scene they are holding hands again. i followed this chapter all the way to the end. and it was never brought up again. the spat they have at the end after Teddy is rescued felt like an entirely different argument and im willing to bet right now when he saves her it will all be forgotten again. one sec, Ill look I was right. Skimmed over the next few chapters and not a single mention of it. this oversight destroyed this story for me. im sure others will like it. the writings not bad. but you dont end a relationship twice, blame a man for the near death of your child, and then take his hand and skip off with him because he saved your life. nor should he just forget everything Eiric said to him about it and get over it. once again i would Like to say everything else leading up to that point and if I could forget about those parts I could honestly say this is a really great story. its well written, I like the characters, iI like the small case adjustments. I just can't get over that part.

I like your story and it's well written but i am italian and the italian grammar is almost all wrog...i only say this because it's true and i really like your story :)

THIS IS AMAZING! Please write more!

This cliffhanger is hurting my fangirl heart. Please update! I really like this story and you are doing a great job with it.

Lots of misspellings in this chapter.

Please Update!

Just asking for dumb and sleep deprived people (aka meWhere does Eiric come from? Is it like a nickname or second name?