So, I love your story. You have such a grand way of explaining the details and the expressions in here that I just get drawn in and can't get out.

I just thought I would point out that you said that Betty was the name of Danny's editor but then you called the school secretary by that name, though I think you introduced her as Angela. Just wanted to point that out. You've done an extraordinarily good job on this as well as your other stories.

So, since I started this story of yours, I had this thought pop into my head that... honestly has kept me laughing about ever since. Imagine, if you would;
Danny brings Lex and Sam into the ghost zone for the first time and meet Skulker (or Skulker shows up in the living world on a family outing, whatever). Witty banter ensues as Danny and Skulker go at it then Skulker notices Sam, a common human that spends time with Danny, and the small ball in the stroller that is known as a 'human baby'.
"Who is this, Ghostchild?"
"That's Sam and our baby, Skulker."
Skulker pauses to process this and screams loudly, "The Ghostchild had a ghostchild!"
I can't even stop laughing about that. It's too hilarious to think about. Anyway, thanks for putting up with my rambling. Have a great day!

very very good

OH MY GOSH THAT WAS AMAAAZING! The characters, the world, the plot- all of it was so beautifully natural and good! If there wasn't PP, it could be cannon. As it is however, it is going to be one of those rare stories that stay in my head as being almost-cannon

I have no words...

Good job...

That was a really nice and lovely story, even if the amount of bi persons nearly killed me (I knew we were more than the press makes us believe ;) )

I wished while reading that the focus lay more with Danny and Dash, but I guess including the rest was important for the storyline. I hope for more

Awesome!

So...I read this entire story on that other fic website in two nights. And by the time I was finished it was going on 6 in the morning.

I'm happy I found this fic on fanfiction so I could post this comment and fav this story. This was the first Danny/Dash ship I ever read a i LOVED IT TO PIECES!

Lex was the cutest thing and the chemistry between Danny and Dash was just...UUUGGGHHHH! It was slow, drawn out and it just grew on you! I really loved Danny's character in all this and cried so hard to realize Sam was killed. And then that growing relationship with Dan and Kwan? It killed me it was so f*cking adorable.

OMG I just started reading this story two days ago and when I got to chapter 45 at least i think that's the chapter when danny got that call from darren,I imediately predicted that the person danny was talking about was freakshow I was just like "it's freakshow...right?" and then when I got to the next chapter I was like "I knew I just knew it!"

Super cute! I love how you wrote this and that everyone's changes were still believable and in character, and it was so long and I love your writing so much it makes me ramble.

...did Steven shoot Sam? I have a weird feeling...

Nice

Why do I have a funny feeling that Steven is some kind of ghost hunter or child of a ghost hunter? Cause that wish was for someone like danny. How like danny is Steven Exactly?

Thanks, I really enjoyed your story!

Is there more if so please do more.