Aw! That’s cute, and sad, and a ton of other stuff but overall it’s awesome. Great work, I see it’s been years since his was posted but I wish there was more, I totally love Nicos and Leo’s characters and haveing them both in one fan fiction together is great, especially with you addressing that Nico is young, and not this older teenager that everyone seems to think he is.

yaaaay i 3 platonic Valdangelo

:-)

This is so good!

OK, you successfully managed to upset four of my favourite characters in this. NO! WON'T! LET! NONONONONONONONONONONO! D':
But I'm glad Leo and Nico have got each other... have a cookie (::)

why are we for getting that Nico is only 13 just kid a lot people mking him high schooler when he only a middle schooler oh nice work

It makes me feel like I'm really standing in their places! Good work!

I love nico and Leo so much! Putting them both together is frikkin epic

I found this because of the link you put on Tumblr. 'Low quality'? Are you insane? This is amazing and fantastic and it makes me want to hunt down the Argo II and give both Leo and Nico a huge hug! Aggghhh, the feels!

Here I was, looking fanfics about Leo and Nico when I come across this fanfiction perfect. I felt deeply moved. I think Nico and Leo even need to unite and so will be stronger. oh god, I cried reading this

I'd read pretty much anything about Nico. He's awesome, and it just breaks my heart whenever people, Rick Riordan included, mention how he might possibly be going insane after the Tartarus incident. That's kind of a good thing, because if you're anything like me, the middle school-age, obsessive fangirl that I am, you get a strange giddy feeling when your favorite male characters get tortured, hurt, traumatized, and/or mistreated. Right? Am I right?

Just notice that while the books have been told from a past tense narrative, you have used a third person present tense narrative. You might want to watch out for that.

Nico and Leo (and Percy) are my favourite characters and I'm happy that you found a way to make them friends. Like you said: The son of Hades and the funny son of Hephaestos are a odd pair.
I like it! Very much!

I like it :) Leo kinda has an older brother role to nico, and thats definitely a first. Great job :)