Omg! That was hot! Thanks for sharing!

I loved this!

this is excellent; i loved your style and pacing. it's slow, erotic and sensual. love it (:

Oh. My. God...*fans self* *faints anyway*

nice little fic

Well, that was steamy but definitely good. I know you have a long story and I generally don't read long stories especially when they're not complete. Too many writers leave things unfinished and I hate that. But seeing how beautifully you write, I'm going to give it a shot.

Now this is really more of what I was expecting from "Particles of Light." Fresh and unique.

The first thing I'm going to say is going to sound very nit-picky, and I apologize in advance. I only mention it because it's very out of character for you, but the line should be, "Your rules are unfair, Haruhi." in chapter 1. Again, I apologize - it was probably auto-correct at fault.

I think your writing style is perfect for this fandom. I've always thought your style was etherial and airy, or like waking up on a Sunday morning with a crisp, salty breeze streaming through an open window, filtering everything through a gauzy curtain of warm sunlight. You have a delicate way of setting a scene and it complements this world of opulence and gilded light. Your characters often float around these stages you've created with a quietness, more than detachment, that is often somewhat at odds with their more canon surroundings. Your stories often serve as a retreat, a stolen moment, some savory, ephemeral fruit.

Here, though, your words are in perfect harmony with the bright, canon world in which we picture these characters. It's such a remarkable thing for this singular mood you're able to set to be so fitted to the OHC world, or maybe visa versa - who can say?

I will say, though, that I miss Tamaki's token exuberance in this piece. As appealing as that princely host can be, he's move lovable for his open character, I think, at least. This maturity is more belonging to the child who would sit by his mother than the young man who learned to laugh. It's all his passion without any of the outbursts that often stem from such a wellspring of emotion. Maybe I'm saying nothing, but I did miss his signature energy.

In any event: excellent.

Just gobbled up this one too and oh my goodness (fanning self). This was just as good as the Kyoya and Haruhi piece. Maybe better cause I love Tamaki and Haruhi together. And I am officially in love with your writing and promise I will get to the long story once I have some time, ok? Thank you thank you thank you for this delish morsel.

Nice one!

This is sweet and loving and hot. Nice to read an M-rated story that's realistic and not written by a virgin or a twisted perv. The writing sparkles - yes it does.

omg - cant believe i only just found this - luv them together - kawaiiiii

loved it

Nice work. Good dialogue, good writing, good sex. Thumbs up.

Many thanks to the muse for the vignette! :-) The poem is perfect with it. This pair is one of my two favorites, and they are great together. I will forgive you this time for writing about them and not about Kyoya ;-) More will always be appreciated and read excitedly!

Cherry blossom petals... yep, sounds like our Tamaki! Now there's some romance! Somehow I am not surprised that Haruhi has set up rules for acting and kissing in public, or that Tamaki has managed to employ Haruhi indirectly. The pajama part is SUPER cute...just makes me want to say "AWW" really loudly.