Yoi really need a beta. Or to edit this. Or even just use some online grammar tools. I'm not much of a stickler for grammar but this is just really bad. It gave me a headache trying to understand what you were saying. Also you really need to learn about show don't tell. Yoi just keep doing this happened then this happened. There's no connections explaining why people are doing what they are doing none of that at all. You have decent ideas I think (I had enough trouble reading it I'm not even sure of that) but you REALLY need to edit this to make it more legable.

Interesting things that had happened in this chapter. I wonder how this will unfold. I look forward to it.

Omake?: A Bell like knell rang over the Hogwarts grounds and Little Haggleton that sounded like:
"DOOM! DOOM! DOOM! DOOM!"

But "Doom" for whom? Tom M. "IALV" Riddle Jr and his Death Eater Orchestra?
Harry "I'm Not the Boy You're looking for" Potter?
or someone else?

Tom is in for a very bad night, and so are his minions.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Nice chapter continue please.

Just wait till Fleur and her family find out what Gabrielle is capable of now.

nice to see an update, fun tale

Cool chapter continue please.

"And here we go!" ~ Heath Ledger Joker

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

interesting story look forward the next chapters

Omake: A mauve haired tween grinned as he leaned against a nearby door frame: "A grand and mysterious adventure beyond your wildest imagination, mademoiselle. A grand and mysterious adventure."
The mauve haired lad then seemingly faded out of existence as if he was never there to begin with.

nice to see its return, love Eva

Poor Gabby, she jumped into the deepend with binding herself. Maxime may find herself in jail, though I get the feeling nothing will happen with Albus.