| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Power of Anger |
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KShara Khan chapter 4 . 5/30 It's been more than five years since the last update so are you going to continue with this story? I think it's too good not to continue it! |
superdude50989 chapter 4 . 3/18 Looking forward to more chapters |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/10/2019 Hedwig is literally 25 while Harry is 14 |
No name chapter 1 . 8/27/2019 Not to be mean or anything but I found this story slightly cringy since there's quite few of cliché stuff here like the teachers found him just before he manage to kill himself, then seems like he gonna gets OP stuff from how he meets death and magic...also at the fact that he was brought back to life and stuff, I mean don't get me wrong that's in Canon but urghh that kind of story doesn't makes any sense to me since he killed himself to get away from the pain and now he willingly go back there where there's only pain for him...yeah he is selfless and all but everyone has their breaking point and I would've thought that killing himself is the sign that he'd reached his and would love nothing more than to have some peace... Lol, no hard feeling tho |
Tenjo chapter 1 . 6/14/2019 This would be interesting if it wasn’t so.. overplayed? I’ll list a few things. Hermione and Ron suddenly calling him Potter; hate him they might, but addressing him Harry was ingrained into them. Albus constantly screaming; starting off, a more realistic reaction to the letter would be desperate denial and disbelief, and then he was shouting at the students after showing them all a dead body.. not the smartest thing to do regardless of what he felt they were guilty of. The punishments; I can understand actually punishing the students who actively bullied him, but why was it only done AFTER it went that far and why were the punishments so long lasting and, in Ron and Hermione’s case, absurd? The last glaring problem I had was with the over the top melodrama in which they conveniently made it to him before he killed himself just so he could say that one terribly ‘sad’ line. It wasn’t sad. It was cringeworthy and forced. |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/1/2019 Please update |
AbandonedPlay chapter 4 . 2/8/2019 Please update soon this is a amazing story and can't be left alone to stagnate for two long and its almost been 4 years already |
James351 chapter 4 . 1/16/2019 Please continue |
Jacob Phantom chapter 4 . 12/24/2018 Please update your story soon! |
Azrael's Son chapter 4 . 12/9/2018 so great i want to read more ! |
Rebmul chapter 4 . 12/8/2018 giggidy |
John Palms chapter 4 . 10/17/2018 i was pretty much about dying with laughter(as close as u can get to laughing really hard while reading) especially at the end. i love how you gave Harry the ability to actually create powers, and i have to admit I am really jealous of Fred and George's ability. Lol. i do think that you should keep the two sisters and Amanda too OUT of his harem, one i just don't think i suits Harry, two I personally want to see something happen between harry and hedwig. Lanara i feel should act similar to a bodyguard(not that he needs one) but i don't think that amanda would be very good in combat., she may be good in interrogations, or detective work, but not fighting. as for hedwig i see her mostly as a healer since she can turn into a phoenix. as for the two sisters, they may be very good at fighting from a distance so that they could dodge spells, but they have no defensive abilities. but lanara giving the fact she can add or take away her tail , she will be very good in had to hand combat and is probably very strong since she is a magical creature. Going o with what i said about her tail if someone was to attact from a distance, she can probably dodge and maneuverher way through everything thrown her way, it would also be very intimidating to watch her grow a tail and probably rise the rest of her body into the air like a snake. i also would like to suggest for hagrid that you give him the power to talk to animals, but i cannot say anything about the rest, sorry. Sincerely, John Palms |
John Palms chapter 3 . 10/17/2018 I hope you finish your current cycle and add this to your next one, but i seem not to be able to access your profile so i can't say anything about your current cycle. i enjoy reading this story a lot thank you so much and I hope u eventually get back to it, sorry you are getting some hate. Sincerely, John Palms |
John Palms chapter 2 . 10/17/2018 i think this is a very interesting story, espically him coming back sooner, though I wish he was still friends with ron and hermionie, i think it makes him very mature and i hope he also came back from lady magic educated so that he wouldn't have to focus on school. I also like the idea of addeing a lamia, i never really see these is any stories, in fact i only saw them in a video game called world of war craft. Hedwig becoming a metamorphous because of harry is very clever too and i hope that since hermione and ginny both betrayed him that it begins a new romance story instead of the typically ginny or hermionie. i also like how the way they apparated at the end was very different and gives me the feeling of a very strong presence. i personally love almost every aspect you have made or added in this fanfic and i love how unique and different it is. just a thought for you, why don't you add the fact that since he is a metamorphagus, can turn into any animal he wants, and is now related to lady magic, why don't you add that he can turn into a a ghost or if not a ghost a werewolf or something like that. thank you for changing the typical harry potter fan fiction, and hope you write loads more. Sincerly, John Palms |
Jardanius Peverell chapter 4 . 9/9/2018 Is this abandoned? |