Great. Tiva forever.

Nicely wrapped up or just started? I know this story is marked complete but you gave us a lot ... left things open for more.

["You say it's better to seek forgiveness than ask permission, but if I don't ask permission, I'd have to break rule number six and apologize later, which is a sign of weakness." ] Ha, I like how the rules are all meshing up!
["Rule number twe…."

"I need permission to break it," Tony interrupted.] Ooh, I like how you set that up!

OOoh, I like how this is written and that they don't trust each other!
If Gibbs tells you to work out your issues, you obviously have to be sent to the men's bathroom for fixing, haha!
[Tony shot her a smile, "that's the spirit." He moved past her and only stopped when he felt her hand on his arm.
] Awh, at least they're trying!
["No, Tony… he is calling." Ziva pulled back, severing the connection between their bodies. She lifted his phone off the bureau and handed it to him.] HE CAN LEAVE A MESSAGE-THEY WERE KISSING, omg!
This was beautiful!

WOW! You nailed this! Absolutely loved it. You did an amazing job at capturing the characters idiosyncrasies.

in love with this!

AHHHHHH! What a lovely it could be that simple. Thanks for writing that! p

I like this. It felt natural and well paced. No rushing headlong into left field:) Can't wait to see if you tapped into the writers' minds, haha. They would do well to follow your lead! Nice work:)

Intriguing start and love the TIVA theme in this first chapter. Hope to read more soon :)

Good chapter

This story was wonderful. It had everything. I think we DO need to seeTony angry with Ziva and the whole McGee situation...that must be straightened out first and then working together as the great partners they to capture Bodnar. And how happy am I to see dear sweet Smeall again - I hope we do on the show.
Thank you for this. It was just what I need. I hope you continue this as BERLIN is still weeks away !

Great story. Will there be another chapter?
I'm from Berlin and there is a Bezirk in the eastern part of Berlin that's called "Lichtenberg". In the time of the seperation of Germany the headquaters of the Stasi, the east German secret service, eere located in Lichtenberg.

Love the story & the interaction between Ziva & Tony, hope you update pretty quickly though as I want to read more!

This was just amazing! And I want this to happen in Berlin, so badly! It would be perfect especially with the sweet kiss and the hug! I just want this, bitte!

Love!