I love the story. But the lack of pronouns is really confusing.

I have stayed up until ungodly hours of the night to read this beautiful piece of aRT and this was so wonderful and you nailed all the emotions, I think your dialogue for the boys was totally in character and you hit all the right plot points with how each brother would react and when and it was just so good I think you deserve a medal like wow please have a splendid day and might you consider writing a novel?

Wonderful story, loved it xx

Beyond perfect xx
Was not expecting a tornado though haha

Ahh, love it xx

Agh, Sammy noooo

Ahhh I love it!

This is amazing! probably shouldn't have read it at work, goodness knows my face is ... an interesting shade of red... well done!

I do love it when the boys get to have a happy ending (although admittedly throughout this story they had lots of happy endings!) a true happily ever after. Brilliant story! Thank you x

Finally! That was intense and brilliantly written. Now bring on the good stuff x

I'm totally addicted to this story but seriously cannot wait for Sam to stop fucking everything up and just be honest with his feelings!

Yay! Bobby fraggin' accepts 'em! It's a fuckin' Christmas miracle!
An' yes I know it ain't anywhere near Christmas since it passed by 'bout two months but the odds o' that 'appnein' is jus' like a Christmas miracle

Gods I'm ready to tear their father apart and send him back ta Hell where he belongs! I hate all the homophobic crap people go on about and how I keep hearing that men shall not lie with men, and all that but it says nothing bout women lying with women or how supposedly "GOD" loves all children equal but will condemn those that are gay and "love" others in ways straight people will rarely ever understand. Gods of Hell, those rosary rattlers must hate Grecians...

-yowls loudly and cuffs Sam over the back of the head hard, resisting the urge to grab a fuckin' frying pan and bludging him ta death with it- What the fuck is wrong wit' ya!? Y were the one ta make Dean promise "ONE BLOODY NIGHT" an' yer the one complainin' and tryin' ta seduce him when ya made "HIM" promise ta ya everythin' would go back ta normal?! Ya ain't some bitch or whore ta screw like the others otherwise he would probably be screwin' ya continuously as I yell at ya, an' he wouldn't be tryin' so hard ta keep his PROMISE! -sighs and runs a hand through my hair, energy gone, faded from all the yelling and fury- Hell man... Ya really fucked up.

They're together! Finally they're together! ...but knowin' ya an' the way ya write, I doubt they'll jus' be left happy after this.