This is rather dark for a fic that's tagged as romance and humor.

I have to say, I loved this story and your ending is so cruel and genius! I literally read this story in one sitting so I'm just going to attempt to give you my thoughts for the whole thing. Hara is a really amazing character and totally perfect for Mikoto! I loved it when Kusanagi was describing their relationship (not sure which chapter it was) and he called Mikoto Hara's bitch. I couldn't stop laughing! I remember you saying you were concerned about OOCness but I think you consistently did a good job of capturing the canon characters. This whole concept of a Queen is brilliant and gives you amazing opportunities to create exciting plots. I'm a bit disappointed that Hara never marked anyone herself but I hope to see it in the sequel. I'm going to be honest, when I saw the lemon warning my immediate reaction was "FINALLY!" but not in a bad way. It was going to be her first time and she had every right to hold out for as long as she wanted. But by the end of the chapter I thought to myself "oh lucky. that creepy guy didn't creepily watch them." then I went to the next chapter and thought "oh shit. I see a psychotic break in this man's immediate future. Is this going to be another incident like with that one guy from the beginning?" and the answer was "yes. times 100"
Poor Mikoto! the heart break is so real it broke my heart :'(
All around amazing job and I'm going to start the sequel immediately! Tomorrow! (it's currently 2:30 AM as I write this)

My only issue is WHO FALLS FOR THAT? Even if she believed she could take him he didn't even give any proof that there was a company and she has met him only once before. Gah.

I got pissed at the end because of Katuro. Other wise, I loved it! It's a great story, hopefully others will lend their time and read it :3.

While I do understand that Hara is danger prone- due to the title of the fic, her getting kidnapped seems to get a little redundant. u wu
I really did enjoy the first few chapters while they were all interacting in high school though, That was very cute. Well done with keeping Mikoto in character too. :

Loved it

WHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTT. WHY?KDS FLKYEAGH
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omg i love your story, i can't imagine why it doesn't have more reviews, it deserves 200! :D

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This was a great story. I enjoyed reading it. Can't wait for the next squeal.

I could never sleep

Cute begining

NO NO NO OMG NO T.T I want more SEQUEL pleas!
I love your story pleas keep it up ;-)

i love it how you showed mikoto's sweet side i really love it!

wow I really didn't expect this ending, can't wait for the sequel !