I like the idea portrayal of Atem and Yugi as twin brothers.

Mini mini omake in a way kinda

I wish suga mama was real she was my favorite character

Sorry my spell check jaked up my review I was the one that just reviewed

I miss the proud family that was one of my favorite shows when I was a kid now it's off the air Damon Disney for putting the scrap they have today only like 3 shows are decent the rest is carp oh and I think I'm going to like this story

Holy FRIGGGGGGG AHHHHHH! The last past ahhh! Somebody get me some soap and wash out my brain! I can't believe he did that. That's so...EWWWW. Sorry I'm sixteen but a very clear minded sixteen year old and that...that did it for me :D gonna go to bed now and read the rest tomorrow. Goodnight!

Geez Louise! Does EVERYONE want Yami?Daaaang. Poor guy can't get a break! Thats what happens when you're attractive and you come to America. You should have known. Oh and I LOVED it when he mind crushed Oscar that was hilarious to envisionXD

Woah. That last part was...interesting. I see now what you meant by weird. PHAROAH YOU DONT BE NEEDIN' TO CREEP ON EIGHTH GRADERS O.O Well, it is rated T ,I should be more prepared but incidently I never am...All well, just as long as there's no Slash. But I am liking this story so far(:

I LOVE THIS! I haven't seen the Proud Family in such a long time! I used to love that show! You describe them so well! Ugh, I hated LaCienaga. But the mixture of ghetto black people (I can say that because I'm black) and Japanese/Egyptian/whatever-Domino-city-is-in should be utterly fantastic! And hilarious! Can't wait to see what nuttiness happens next!