This is an amazing story. Sad you left it alone but maybe some came up so I respect your decision

i hope you'll be done rewriting this story! i love this _

Where is chapter 14?

Nice story so far not sure if this is the redo or the original, but either way I am enjoying it so keep up the great work!

I honestly couldn't get through half of chapter one. So many things make zero sense.
1. The Kyubi, or Kurama isn't a female. I don't know why people do this, but bijuu are just masses of chakra.
2. Naruto's mindscape cannot be altered, because it is a manifestation of his being. He would need to radically change is personality to do anything like what you wrote.
3. Kurama would NOT start being nice and cooperative just because Naruto hugged him. It took Naruto years of trial and error, only to have to fight Kurama to submission first.

I suggest putting the story as an AU, or alternate universe.

I just finished this story and I really really like it, I haven't read too many stories were Naruto leaves before becoming a ninja but this one went even further and I love it! I have one question though this is tagged as a romance so I was wondering what the pairings were going to be?

This seems pretty interesting. I always enjoy fics where author tries to do something different with Sasuke.

I'm unsure if this first 13 chapters I just read was your revamped version or not, but whatever it was it was extremely good and I very much enjoyed it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Just happy to know, you didn't abandon it. Take your time.

Yeah a rewrite that doesn't completely make a complete 180 (unless the fics that bad) is always a good thing, so can't wait to see the extras you add in, though you should change the description to show us the chapters you edited since there are no updates for edits.

Look forward to to the changes.

I've never actually seen a rewrite competed so have fun with that.

If say release the chapters as you finish them. Makes the wait easier for us. Will it be uploaded under a new name?

What is with everyone rewriting stories. It is solo annoying

As you go! I love your story, plot and characters! I can't wait to see the versions.