| Reviews for Just A Passing Comment |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2019 You definitely could have made a full length instead of a one-shot because there was alot of content ideas in this, but being a one-shot it was still really good besides the rushed ending. I thoroughly enjoyed it t'was awesome :3 |
 user needs a username chapter 1 . 9/6/2019 ha! Stupid wonderful cuteness! |
| Betenowaru chapter 1 . 4/23/2019 THE FUCKING ENDING IS SO FUNNY Ed punched him That made me die but revived because of Human transmutation |
| Betenowaru chapter 1 . 4/22/2019 Also the Ending killed me but again revived cuz of human transmutation |
| Betenowaru chapter 1 . 4/22/2019 I Cracked and laughed so hard I Died but was revived with human transmutation Because of the line "picking up kittens and stuffing them in his armour" |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2018 This was very good |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2018 Reeeee I loved it |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2018 *screeches really loud while strangling edward stuffed toy* |
| Renrik chapter 1 . 3/27/2018 When a character tells another character to stop being OC XD |
| batsbloodsoup chapter 1 . 3/26/2018 That was pretty damn good :) |
| Bridgethegrape chapter 1 . 1/28/2018 I loved the ending |
| Carrie3 chapter 1 . 12/13/2017 Always a fan of parental RoyEd. Keep up the good work! |
| Sylphrena33 chapter 1 . 12/2/2017 Nice. I really like the idea behind this, and I thought the first half turned out really well. The ending feels a bit rushed though. |
| Soulless Anti-Hero chapter 1 . 11/2/2017 The end was funny |
| TrueCountryCowgirl chapter 1 . 10/20/2016 That's the most likely ending I've ever read |
