| Reviews for The Path That Moonbeams Make |
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   OneLittleSpark18 chapter 3 . 7/23 WOW! Okay! The detail of Emma fiddling with her swan necklace when she’s tempted to trust Hook (the SYMBOL of what her broken trust looks like), that is AMAZING! |
| Nemo chapter 1 . 7/23 I just wanted to say that I love, love this story and read it again from time to time. I was really hoping Hook turned out to be a time spurned Peter Pan, but :/ that didn’t turn out the way it should have. Gotta day, you’re a better writer than the own show’s writers were. |
| Sophisticated Sage chapter 15 . 1/3 This story was fantastic! And Snow is an amazing mother in this, I just have to say :D |
| QualityBean chapter 15 . 7/13/2019 OMG STAHP I LOVED THIS AND YOUR THEORY SO MUCH BETTER |
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/26/2019 Hella good job! |
| musicnlyrics chapter 15 . 2/17/2019 WHATTHEHECK I am so glad I started reading OUAT pieces again. Thank you so much for sharing this—I love it! |
| Brokenblackrose89 chapter 15 . 1/13/2019 A thoroughly enjoyable story! j |
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/19/2018 You. Are. An. Amazing. Writer. |
| rebecca taylor chapter 15 . 12/5/2018 I LOVE IT! :) |
| rebecca taylor chapter 7 . 12/5/2018 I LOVE IT! |
| Mrs Speer chapter 6 . 9/27/2018 love the line "she commandeered me" straight to the heart that one |
| wrongwayco chapter 15 . 3/7/2018 So I read this story awhile ago and saved it, but after writing something myself and realizing how stupidly excited I got over the littlest comment, I just wanted to let you know that I LOVED your story. It's such a clever divergence and I love your characterizations. Thank you for sharing your writing with us! |
| aestheticedits5813 chapter 3 . 2/25/2018 This story is fantastic |
| call us crazy chapter 15 . 5/27/2017 I have... thoughts. and feelings. so many. I'll log in on my computer and post them in a review soon. I should have posted way way more reviews along the way but I was always too excited to go on to the next chapter! so much so that you almost made me miss a plane. honestly. will explain further in an official review. but for now, let me just say- WOW. wow. truly- wow. |
| SeleneHarker chapter 15 . 5/14/2017 There's not much I can say except that I completely loved this story. From the highly original plot to the characterisation and dialogue, I thought it was amazing. It made me remember why I shipped Captain Swan in the first place- not only because they make a hot couple but because they suit each other so well, they understand each other and can be sweet without retorting to corniness. Plus your Charmings were really entertaining (Oh David). I wish I was a Labyrinth fan just so I could keep on reading. I'm gona start follow just in case you decide to write another terrific OUaT story. Kudos! |
