Reviews for His Name |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love cute fluff like this! Very very cute! |
![]() ![]() Awww... I love it. And the fact that you used the name Adam not Vincent or Alexander or whatever. I truly loved that name for him, i know it wasn't official but when i looked at the prince, i said yes, he's definitely an Adam. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. My first BatB fic and I'm happy that I read this one! :-) Good job. |
![]() ![]() It's very sweet! A lot more agreeable than other fanfictions I've stumbled upon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() No, this one made me cry! Belle has a special place in my heart, being the first Disney princess movie I ever watched and I just love the relationship she has with Adam/Beast throughout the movie! You capture it perfectly and I just love this so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was beautiful! So short but beautiful and sweet :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet. It's so wonderful it should've been a scene in the actual movie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A wonderful little story! I'd never really thought about the fact Belle only knew him as "Beast" before. Very nice. "And suddenly, he realized his name didn't belong to him anymore. Not him now, or him ten years ago. It belonged to her now." That was my favorite part of the story. A very lovely passage. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a sweet way to bring this up! I always thought it was uncharacteristically rude of Belle to just refer to him as beast when I was little, but then my Mom mentioned that maybe he prefered it that way. Nicely done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is so sweet, I always wondered what his name was... :) This is beautifully written and very cute! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a sweet lovely bit of fluff! Too cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww this is really sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, this is cute. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. I love how you used the Romeo and Juliet to talk about how people think of names and how important it is. This story had an almost poetic or romantic feeling but at the same time very simple. Beautiful. I'm sorry if this doesn't feel like a real critique but I do want to give you the praise you deserve. By the way, do you ever read OC centered stories? I'm a new writer and I'm looking for new readers to read my story, A Villager's Tale. I have two chapters up so far, would you be willing to read it and give me your honest opinion? Thanks for considering my offer and I really did enjoy reading your one-shot. |