Reviews for Broken Rules
MYKZiva chapter 8 . 11h
Very nice storyline. I do want to encourage you to use names or descriptions of the person more than pronouns, especially when the sentence involves more than one person. Chapter 7 got quite confusing with so many people. Also very nice is the Rule list at the end.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/15
I'm confused, caitlin 3mths, jenny 9mths,? How does the maths on pregnancy work out?
DeathDagger chapter 4 . 9/19/2015
They so emotional lol
Wolflover2323 chapter 8 . 10/26/2013
so good
GibbsnJennyslilgirl chapter 8 . 6/18/2013
Awesome fanfic! Love it!
Ladyaloysius chapter 8 . 6/6/2013
I JUST LOVED THIS WHOLE STORY!
Ladyaloysius chapter 4 . 6/6/2013
Oh, mama! This is so good!i love it!
Ladyaloysius chapter 2 . 6/6/2013
You're nailing this! I can see them doing and saying this!
Ladyaloysius chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Excellent choice! About time they worked it all out!
Guest chapter 7 . 5/26/2013
This was a very cute story, but how exactly do they have a three month old and a nine month old?
Lesly chapter 8 . 5/10/2013
Me gusto mucho la historia sobretodo la nueva regla 12, bien pensado...
madcloisfan chapter 7 . 4/12/2013
Loved it
Back From A Daydream chapter 8 . 4/11/2013
Aww! Its so aborable!
pia chapter 8 . 4/9/2013
love it! i hope to read more of your work soon :) thanks for sharing.
honeycrispregal chapter 7 . 4/9/2013
AWWWWWW. I like how you rewrote rule 12:))))