Why did you stop writing this? This is great. Smut great. YOU'RE GREAT!

This is fantastic. I love how well you keep the style of the book and I hope that you will continue this.

AGHHAGH IT'S THAT LAST LINE AGAIN! I could do backflips.

This made my day. Honestly. And it hasn't even started yet. Written beautifully, you get the narrator's feelings and confusion really well, Tyler's voice is fantastic and the sex was fucking hot.

CONTINUE! IT'S A COMMAND!

SF

asasdfghjkl THIS just this is why I am up this morning with a cup of cold coffee and the itchiest tights in the world omg this. The dialogue was PERFECT, you got Tyler and the narrator's tone just right and then that last line...

I nearly exploded over my kitchen. To much suspense.

Ok I'm very excited now, This may or may not be a good thing.

SF

Love it. Really well written and fits in perfectly with the story in terms of style and the like. And on to reading the rest.

SF