I know I'm about two years too late, but I am a proud member of the Review Revolution, so, I'm reviewing it anyway. First off, I must say that last September, when I first started watching TWD, I shipped Caryl from the get-go. And I wanted more than their teasing. I stumbled upon this site, and the first story I ever read was 'Snake'. It was AWESOME. I must say that it is one of my favorites still to this day. Since then, I continued with the series till I was all up to date with S4. Then I started to ship Bethyl. Then I watched S5, and then Beth died. I was heartbroken, and didn't know how to cope. Then, after the second half of S5, I came back to Caryl after the forehead kiss. I realized that they're a better match, that they belong together. So, I binged on Caryl fanfic, and TWD, and now I'm back to Caryl.
I just wanted to say that you are one of the main reasons I came back to Caryl. If not for your stories, I would still be mopey about Bethyl, so thank you. I love your writing, and this story is adorable. I love Carol and Karen getting to team up, and them being friends was a great idea. Love it!
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HAHA! Love that twist! Carol and Karen working together, that's gold! Perfect! Oh my god yes!

This was such a cute little story, I loved reading every minute of it - you've gained yourself a huge fan, mate. :D

lol Sneaky.

lol Daryl just needed a little push.

Gotta love tag-teaming!

Great job once again XD

this is just great! Thank you!

This is absolutely brilliant!
You know, I came to this site to find Carol/Daryl at all, because there isnt any story about them in German!
And now, I read this and Im in love with it. (And with Daryl, but that doesnt count :P)
I would like to say how I like your grammar and all the rest, but Im not really practiced in the english language.
I only learn it at school, but that isnt something you can use ordinarily.
So I can only assure that I really like this story, that I enjoyed to read it and that I hope you can understand my poor english ;)
And may I ask you to give me your OK to translate it into German, because I believe there would be some German Carol/Daryl fans,
which arent such as subborn as me and spent their time on english fanfiction-pages?!
I would be very glad to do this.
Of course I would indicate that it is your story and I would refer to this site.

Greetings from Germany,
Svenja (Pony)

I love it! Yay Carol!

Cool, cool, cool! Loved it and your writing is very appealing!

So glad you added this! No problem to me you thought this up in Church . . . my mind always wandered, too! :D
Naughty you but I love you for it.
3 times. . . wow. . . well, they DO have to make up for lost time LOL!

Well that was quite sexy for someone who doesn't write about sex. So cute that it was all a big plan the whole time! She definitely shouldn't tell Daryl though, that's a recipe for disaster. Best to keep it Secret Women's Business.

**Snort!** Perfect twist! And droool. Lucky Carol. Well done!

Ooh! Cringe! I can't help it whenever I see Karen, but she does serve a good purpose in Caryl fics...she's a good kick up the old backside for Daryl. Loved this cute, sweet, tender wake up call. Just gorgeous.