I didn't notice the second chapter until after I'd left the chapter-one review. Sorry.

This was even better than Raven's chapter. Really good work. Revenge from beyond the grave? Or was it just Jinx's overactive imagination responding to her incredible burden of guilt? Who's to say?

I think I will have to add this to Favorites.

... Damn.

I am quite familiar with that song, and I think your story does it justice.

But ... damn.

Communication, people. C.O.M.M.U.N.I.C.A.T.I.O.N. Talk to the girl. Hardly ANYTHING is beyond salvaging.

But, come to think of it, Raven represents the Deadly Sin of Pride, and it was her pride that was most injured upon discovering Jinx with KF. (Glad she didn't kill him.)

its so sad ...its beautifull.
*sniff*

...call me old fashioned but I prefer stories where the main characters don't DRINK THEMSELVES TO DEATH THEN HAVE THEIR GHOST COME BACK AND KILL THEIR EXLOVER!