Please continue

Please write more! IM DESPITE FOR MORE!(dont worry, Im not:)

Wow. Sky and Bloom are already crushing! XD One question..maybe two or three.

1.) I know how Stella and Musa will hate each others guts...but ill they become friends?

2.) Will there be romance?

3.) When will you update?

A couple mistakes too, but better chapter! BD Update soon!

Limit your point of views and proof read to the max. There are tons of silly mistakes (grammar and punctuation) that could have been easily avoided.

Interesting. I'm SO following this! Though you had a couple probelms and mistakes. Plz P.M so I may tell you. You don't have to if you don't want to. There's a BIG chance you won't P.M me. So I'll tell you now...

1.) You forgot quotation marks.

2.) Go to a new row whenever someone new is talking.

3.) Please proof read your chapters before posting them. 3-4 mistakes are okay. I only saw about 2-3 mistakes.

4.) Your title is...wrong. Nothing bad. Instead of this 'war of the magic dimension' it should be like this 'War of the Magic Dimension.' Fix the title and your story will attract more readers.

I hope you P.M me. This story is great and I can't wait for an update! :)