| Reviews for Unpleasant Surprise |
|---|
thisisaccountisnolongerinuse chapter 1 . 3/12/2016 Oh my God I love it! This is so adorable! Love it! |
sunny.raindrop chapter 1 . 8/24/2014 Aww, that was sad, and sweet, and... Yay! |
l.h.o.o.q chapter 1 . 3/9/2014 D'awwww... |
aRagingWIRfever1 chapter 1 . 4/28/2013 .FLUFF. |
Purest of the Hearts chapter 1 . 4/26/2013 I was freaking out! Why? Because Vanellope was in a lot of danger without knowing it! *sigh* At least it all ended well. |
Makokam chapter 1 . 4/11/2013 I think you could have done more with the kid who'd been playing Heroes Duty. Maybe a stunned/outraged cry of "Mr. Litwak!" Or perhaps a friend of his was watching and says, "Dude! You just got team killed by an NPC!" That said, the "headcanon" this was based on was pretty...detailed. So I like what you did with the rest of the story. Calhoun being scared of losing another loved one more than angry about her being there. Or perhaps angry that Vanellope scared her like that. I think hugging her on the tram back from Fix-It Felix Jr might have been a bit of overkill though. |
Silvertongued Dreams chapter 1 . 4/10/2013 Oooh, this was just perfect, like your other story! I did just catch one error, though. Earlier on in the story (first paragraph or so I believe), you have Sugar Rush all in lower-case letters. And when Felix goes to hug Vanellope and Tamora, you referred to them both as women (don't know if that was intentional or not, as little Vanilla Bean is only 9.) :) Anyway, thanks so much! :D I can't wait to hear more from you! |
guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2013 Dawwwwwwww... Nice little comfort fix here. I could almost picture each sentence in my mind, they fit the characters personalities so well. Tenouttaten. |
nachonaco chapter 1 . 4/8/2013 Awww, this was so sweet! :D |
Spoons And Forks chapter 1 . 4/8/2013 Man, this story was completely sugar-coated sweet, right to the very core! I swear, I think I just died and went to a heavenly world of fluff. I loved every bit of it! Keep up the awesome work! :D I hope you get a lot more reviews, favorites, and alerts for this wonderfully delightful story of yours! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2013 Sweet, lovely, beautiful fanfic! I love how Calhoun shows us some of her caring side towards Vanellope! Love this so much! ;) |
bunnikkila chapter 1 . 4/8/2013 Gosh I loved this! Vanellope playing at the beginning was just too cute, and the way Calhoun initially masks fear with anger is perfect. |