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Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2018 This was exactly nailed their characters, even Natsu somehow |
TheMaknae chapter 1 . 5/28/2016 Ive been looking for something like this since a long time ago! This was beautifully written, I could feel Juvia's emotions very well! My palms were tingling haha Do you think you could write this from Grays point of view? I'm curious about what did and felt all day while Juvia was on her date with Lyon hehe |
UnpredictablyRandomOne chapter 1 . 6/21/2015 The cuteness was overwhelming! My heart practically melted from how incredibly adorable this is. Juvia finally got what she wanted and I'm so happy! This was awesome! |
OTPIchiRuki3 chapter 1 . 5/21/2015 Nicely written. I really enjoyed how you built up the tension! |
AmorEva Luna chapter 1 . 3/11/2015 Aww how cute! A sequel abt nalu! |
tomi7chan chapter 1 . 3/3/2015 I really liked this fanfic ** it really moved my gruvia feels \\\ Hope u write more gruvia fanfic :) |
Akela-Nakamura chapter 1 . 2/19/2015 First one? Excellent hon! Very good. Gray had better own up, because no matter how patient or loving Juvia is, she isn't gonna wait forever. God, I hope their canon! I wonder where Juvia and Gray have been over the timeskip. Makes me wonder if they were together. |
dragonball256 chapter 1 . 10/22/2014 So cute. Poor Lyon hopefully he notices that someone very close to him loves him ;) But I enjoyed the angst because all of it was true and I like that Juvia did try to get over him if only for a little while |
randomteenager chapter 1 . 10/20/2014 AAAAHHH ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL WONDERFUL WORK Aw man, the way you wrote Juvia's opinion towards Gray, you could literally /feel/ her feelings for him, and EVERYONE'S characterization was spot on as always! You are truly a phenomenal writer, its such a joy reading your works! And Gray's confession was PERFECT, you really did justice to everyone's character, thank you! Definitely a fan of you, keep up the good work! :) |
MissKonoha chapter 1 . 6/2/2014 This was beautifully written. Amazing Job! I loved it. |
Ulcaasi chapter 1 . 3/17/2014 And I have all the FT feels. I think I like Fairy Tail too much. GaLe's my OTP so you should totally write about them even tho you havent written FT in like half a year because FT is awesome and definitely NOT because I love that series and wanna read more of it from you. :3 |
MLeggyLeaf chapter 1 . 1/1/2014 "She will need to, soon, right…Gray?" that part is soooo heartbreaking |
lilliaenchanted chapter 1 . 12/5/2013 i can understand thst. i kind of feel weirs, like sometimes juvia can be an okay character and stuff. now that i look back, both juvia and gajeel used to be the bad guys. now i don't know what they are |
ColonelChaos chapter 1 . 11/2/2013 You are a really good writer. |
sparkles princess chapter 1 . 11/1/2013 Aww.. That was so awesome! And you worry it wouldnt fit the standards. Pfft. Bravo! |