Love the fanfic! The smooch was perfect, I couldn't stop smiling! I really hope you'll get motivated to continue. Take care!

Please, Continue!

Ohh myy.. i hope you continue this. I know it has been 3 yrs or so but i would loooooove to know the rest of the story. I shall wait if everrr

I swear to god , if you don't continue I will die

Continue

I like this story so far. I think you've got Diarmuid down pat and I like the relationship between him and Arturia. It's a weird change to see Arturia's change in personality; and you see her change from a dandere to a kuudere to a full on tsundere. Would like to see what comes out of this.

No, it's not too early! 2nd fave pairing besides Gil x Saber (idk why). It's really good so far! I really like it. Keep writing; don't quit!

Can't wait to read more. It's s great story so far. Thank you for sharing.

Awwwe
They are so Kawai
Silver

Dandere Turia!

Well, I do believe the kiss came kind of early since they didn't get to know each other very well but it's fluffy and somewhat cheesy. Please update soon!

Really well written! This is by far the best Saber x Lancer fanfic on the site right now, and it's in my favorite AU! Wish you would update this as you have a real gift for writing. In terms of critiques, I do think the kiss came a little early. I would have had the kiss come a little later. Perhaps after the student council election so the relationship could have built a little more instead of forcing Arturia out of her shell. I'm sure you can write it out easily enough though, Diarmuid choosing to kiss her at that moment was definitely plausible. And he is a guy. Alone with a cute girl in the room ;P

I know this is almost a year old, but there are so few saber and lancer fics out there and this story is adorable so I hope you decide to update it :3

Awww...
This story is just too cute. Update pls :3
Moe is in the air!
*flies away*

Won't you update this? It's really nice. :)