That was lovely :")

cool

Provo, Well done on this whole story, it was fantastic, this last chapter made me tear up once again, please write more

I had tears in my eyes throughout the whole chapter, well done

I stand corrected, and next chapter I think it will be Cell

I think it might be Buu

Really interesting start, can't wait to read the rest

Cell.

I loved every word in the story you are on my are sharring the first place on my best authors ever list the other one is the guy th at came up with dragonball z keep going #GOHANARMY

MAKE A SEQUAL PLEASE !_

Are you gonna write more? Even if you aren't I still love this story so much it's goon on my favorites list which you see doesn't have very many story's. Well keep up the good work!

come on man the solar flare doesnt work if theres no sun

hey man again with the scene changes. this is getting ridiculous. put a line or something to indicate a scene change. and gohan goes ss2 to kill some thugs? since when does he do shit like that?

hey man its a good story so far. but in my opinion theres only one flaw so far. dude from the bottom of this page to the first couple paragraphs in the next chapter, i thought they were getting ready to fight those robots attacking the ship. make a line or something to indicate they fought the robots or something

well i just read the AN for this chapter. U did a great job at making it very RPGish. The way they end up going from base to base really reminds me of how in the beginning of Tales of Symphonia you wamt from Human Ranch to Human Ranch. I can't believe I never saw this one before, how ever I'm also kind of glad i didn't cause now I dont have to wait for updates. Yea

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