| Reviews for Everyone Knows They're Dating Except Them |
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Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2017 Nice story worth a read, well done! 4/5 |
Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/25/2016 Really good, you should definitely write another chapter |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2015 Omg I love it. I was giggling like an idiot the entire time I read this. |
Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/18/2015 Should make another chapter about Sips and Sjin actually going on a date! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2015 I cracked up laughing. But seriously those guys are areses |
Sunshinemoonpops chapter 1 . 3/21/2015 i love the idea of another chapter, because sjips is adorible and i was giggling like no tomorrow. |
AmLu chapter 1 . 2/22/2015 Omg I really liked that! XD That was so funny! Urm maybe you should do both? Like they start out laughing and what not then slowly die out and things get incredibly awkward idk |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2014 More please was funny good job |
anonymous chapter 1 . 9/26/2014 Why not both choices? alternate endings or alt. sequels |
anonymous chapter 1 . 9/26/2014 I like the idea that SOMEONE isn't pairing them together in every single fic they're in as a full on romance. I mean, I may agree with seeing sjips, but It seems to be the only thing people pair Sjin and sips into. I hope Sjin's date with minty goes well |
mcandtf2lover chapter 1 . 8/4/2014 weird |
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 1 . 7/12/2014 lots of promise. made me laugh. could you do one for Zoey and Rythian? ( i know their minecraft series makes them look like they love each other, and they do in the mineverse (well, rythian does as a plot point), but not IRL (zoey has an awesome girlfriend) keep up the good work |
Ravenblinded chapter 1 . 6/18/2014 FLUFF MUST HAPPEN. All screen yelling aside, you have a pretty good story going on here, but I think you should work more on spelling, punctuation, and making things sound more idealistic. Like the fact that they don't call each other by their usernames, they say 'simon' or 'Duncan'. Not lalna. Also, you should really work with LESS talking. Sometimes it's better to simplify quotes. You may want to think about re-doing the first chapter, but STICK WITH THE STORY. It's a fantastic idea, and now the yogscast seem like gossiping neighbors. Also, a suggestion, we should get a view of how sjin's date with minty is boring and awful, and that he was forced into it somehow. He could have had feelings for sips all along, and then sips starts to realize he likes him too O3O. Just a suggestion. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2014 Totally write another chapter! This is great! |
Cat chapter 1 . 5/31/2014 You should really write another one about them thinking they should be dating. Please do! :) |