This is SO good

I absolutely loved this work! I've already read it twice. It's marvelously written and is incredibly engaging and suspenseful! Thank you for writing this amazing story.

This was marvelous, simply marvelous. It was written fairly well with a steady flow to the plot and very well developed characters. I loved it and am happy I read it. :3

Your always going on and on about feedback, now this fix was published years ago, and nothing new has showed up. But if your reading this, the fix is wonderful so far, wherever you are now I truly hope your using your skills for something you love and makes you.
Regards, Sarah

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A lot of people hate on the prequels, but they’ll always have a special place in my heart as they were my introduction to the star wars universe when I was around 4 or 5. Padme and Ani will always be my favorite Star Wars couple, so I’ll always be weak for stories where Ani doesnt fall. Your story was so brilliantly written too! I really love how complex anakin and Obi-wan’s relationship is

This is fabulous. Probably my favourite piece where Anakin does not become Vader, not really. But good enough to justify the travesty of the prequel series. The complexity of his relationship with Obi-wan and the way that you illustrated their love for and challenges with each other side is exquisitely done. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece with us. Favorited!

Pretty shit, man.

Whoa, whoa, whoa what? Obi-Wan? A son? Maybe? A little Obi Jr?

I love how you're writing the redemption here. It feels like a realistic way it could have gone.

It's interesting that the Death Star has already been completed- or has it? Did they only just get word of the building process and did I simply misread?- but either way consider my disbelief happily suspended.

Ha. HA! In your face, Bail!

But... but he's been injured, right? So he has that alibi. How would he have accomplished this? Also *slaps Organa upside the head* I mean, I can't... entirely blame him for his suspicions, but Anakin is conveniently becoming a scapegoat here.
Also, kudos to you for not making this an, "I've changed, everything is better now" fic. He still did really, really terrible things and I love how he's accepted that and is trying so, so hard to change. Even while I want to hug him tightly because all that self-loathing is NOT GOOD FOR YOU, ANI!