Reviews for The Digi-Egg of Aura
Exodia3215 chapter 13 . 7/30/2019
Awesome story so far! Hope u can update soon!
Guest chapter 13 . 3/17/2018
Can his digivice be red and gold with a little bit of blue and his partner be a veemon
The Megaevolved Pony chapter 13 . 1/28/2016
Please continue! I need more of this story! It's absolutely freaking AWESOME! Please continue!
DiscontinuedCharacter chapter 13 . 1/12/2016
Love it Love it LOVE IT! PLEASE FINISH!
Sombrakitty365 chapter 13 . 1/3/2016
Ash got a Digivice! Hooray!
dracologistmaster chapter 13 . 9/15/2015
Ash's life is about to become one massive headache. I look forward to next update.
Kingdom Infinity chapter 13 . 9/10/2015
Whoa.
Guest chapter 12 . 1/14/2015
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what's next. :)
Kingdom Infinity chapter 12 . 1/12/2015
POOP! XD
Dragonspirit996 chapter 11 . 12/22/2014
:) can't wait for more (hopefully, I've seen so many dead stories recently :( )
Watcher321 chapter 11 . 11/28/2014
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one :) I like that you didn't make it all dramatic when Kari found out that Ash and Brock knew they were from another dimension, that would've spoiled the mood.
Sombrakitty365 chapter 3 . 11/27/2014
I hate it when Team Rocket does that intro. It's not just once in a while. It's ALL THE TIME! Annoying. I know that they only said it once in the story, but, still. It gets my pistons pumping (So to speak). Also, I thought it was real funny when Kari that they were either working for NASA, or cheerleaders. LOL!
Sombrakitty365 chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep it up!
firestar91 chapter 11 . 9/7/2014
Update now...please
Terriermon3908 chapter 11 . 9/2/2014
I know I just reviewed, like twice, but I came up with an idea of what should happen when Kari finds out about the whole "Ash draining his power for her scene"
Kari's POV
Kari woke up and looked around. Ash was on the bed next to her, snoring. She giggled and shook hima awake. "Time to eat." she laughed. "mnnn" he graoned. He got up and followed her out of the room. Halfway to the doorway, Kari heard a loud thunk and turned to see Ash had collasped. "ash!" she yelled. Ash's mom entered, and asked, "What happened?" she half screamed. "i don't know!" answered kari. "get Gatomon now!" gatomon entered, having heard the commotion. "whats going-" she asked, but was cut off by loud screaming of stuff like, "get brock!" "what happened?" and "do YOU know, Gatomon?" "maybe it has to do with hiw he brought you back to life!" said Gatomon, surprisingly worried about the consiquences. pikachu had clambered over and was looking at his trainer worriedly. "pika-chu-chu?" he asked. "what do you mean?" Kari said, her suspense growing larger by the moment. "i mean," said Gatomon. "he brought you back to life, but we don't know how." "spirit.. Drained.." mumbled Ash. "you don't think..." asked Kari. "I don't know." said Gatomon. "maybe his energy was drained or..." "NO!" yelled Kari. "c'mon, Ash get up! Don't leave me!"
What will happen next? Of course he won't die.. Thats up to you, author! Can't wait to see your next update! Please take my ideas, or at least consider this sappy scene. I mean, SOMETHINGS got to happent to ash, now his spirits drained. Momentai! Update soon! Please take theseideas for the next pdate! Momentai!
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