| Reviews for The Chosen Pessimist |
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Ravendeer chapter 6 . 5/22 Why didn't you finish this |
mumphie chapter 6 . 11/26/2019 Communication isn't a thing for the Potter family, is it? fox - box ant - any |
mumphie chapter 5 . 11/26/2019 know- now you - you're |
mumphie chapter 4 . 11/26/2019 I guess this IS a sociopathic Harry story. Because if he has no logical reason to hate his parents, yrt dhe does. He called his mother (in his head) a nasty disparaging name. Where would that come from? And will you explain his odd vision when he was a a baby? ...were wallflower... ? were to be a wallflower or wallflowers? typos hail - hair he - her new - knew soy - boy |
mumphie chapter 3 . 11/26/2019 ...nothing but contempt (for) Lily and James... ...more emotional, than the man's. (not mans', since there is a plural and it would be men's) |
mumphie chapter 2 . 11/26/2019 Harry seems pretty unlikable, and probably sociopathic. I would thonk his parent would see him not making friends, even though he pretends. Lily is known to be quite intelligent. Grammar - there (place) , their (ownership) , they're (they are) villainies (the actions or conduct of a villain, outrageous and wicked) villainize (to villify, disparage, speak ill of) |
mumphie chapter 1 . 11/26/2019 An interesting beginning. I will follow to see where you will take it. :) Not sure if a young child who hasn't had much experience in life, no matter HOW intelligent, would be able to hide magic use from his parents. A child learns by doing, and he wouldn't learn to hide it unless given a reason to do so. Also, his parents wouldn't be good guardians if they ignored what he was reading. That maybe where you are going with this. Grammar issues - weather (rain, snow) whether - (generally used between two ideas) peak (top) peek - to look |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/9/2018 I'm sorry for being a grammatical nazi here but "lived their"? So you are one of those English native speakers who has no idea about the major difference between their and there. *somehow, love. NOT "some how". |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2018 *nobody NOT "no body". God above, woman. Have some mercy. Even spellings and errors shouldn't go that far. |
Sarahburch chapter 6 . 7/17/2018 Plz update |
curlyfri24 chapter 6 . 7/12/2018 You are such an amazing writer. I absolutely love this story! I can’t wait to read what happens next! :) |
JustAnotherMarvelFanGirl881 chapter 6 . 6/24/2018 Oh I can't wait to find out what happens next.. Pretty please update soon. |
TessaEboKrova chapter 6 . 2/16/2018 One of the most interesting and well written fanfiction out there. Very elegant and well thought. I love the fact that you made Harry have some weakness and made Harry have a strong personality. I hope that Severus could be Harry's mentor or ally in the future. Are you considering Harry to have his own circle? Will you be making Harry another rising dark lord but much more powerful than othet ones? Will he end Dumbledore life? If you're considering to place Harry in Slytherin, will he have some connection in other houses? Sorry for this many questions! I am so excited for your next update! Reading your piece made my heart raced! Great job! |
SoulMore chapter 6 . 1/5/2018 FAN!~ |
blackbloodywolf chapter 6 . 12/9/2017 more please this is so good! |