| Reviews for Uncharted Territory |
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   KallyC chapter 24 . 7/28 absolutely loved this story! your writing is simply amazing! |
| Sparti28 chapter 24 . 6/8 I love this story! Beautifully written and the story line is awesome. Thank you for sharing! |
| Sparti28 chapter 18 . 6/8 Wait what?! 2 times |
| Sparti28 chapter 17 . 6/8 Wait what! |
| Sparti28 chapter 16 . 6/8 Let alone her hearing lol |
| Sparti28 chapter 16 . 6/8 I’m done lol poor Wendy’s innocent |
| Sparti28 chapter 15 . 6/8 Freaking love cana lol not subtle at all |
| lilxmissxnibbles chapter 24 . 6/6 Im very picky about what i read and i can honestly say i am a big fan of the quality to your writing and the amount of detail . Im in my late 20s and ill only read sexy goodness which ive learned is not everyone's strong point lol sometimes the plot is well written until it gets to a steamy part and it is either hinted at or poorly written.. So i greatly appreciate being able to follow along with both parts so well in my head! Ive read this story a few times now and its one of the best ones so far . Now with the 100s yrs quest and all the hiro mashima nalu, heros and heroines side stories continually coming out, please keep writing nalu stories! Ive enjoyed the anime/manga world now sonce my preteens and this is my favorite pairing lol. Also, little errors like misspelled words or accidentally mixing up tiny details does nothing to ruin the quality of your writing for me so dont listen to reviews from virgin children lol. Youre a great writer! I hope to read more from you in the future |
| ahjinbbuing chapter 1 . 3/16 loved this chapter~ |
| 2cooljocy chapter 5 . 3/10 Omg isn’t that harassment since he’s like asleep LOLLL |
| cosmictrap chapter 13 . 12/5/2019 oh thank god... i was afraid that the whole evil dude thing would stretch further sdlkdjdjkl i love it! |
| sugarplum2498 chapter 12 . 9/9/2019 Also this whole story in general is a really cool concept! I always like to think I’m a pretty creative writer, but I couldn’t come up with something nearly as cool as this ! |
| sugarplum2498 chapter 10 . 9/9/2019 Wooohoo these guys keep getting cockblocked, but I can’t wait until they do finally go all out, that will be fun. |
| sugarplum2498 chapter 4 . 9/8/2019 Do u think Natsu’s body temp is naturally a lot higher than everyone else’s? It seems like common sense that it would, so I wonder if something already hot like semen, would be like hot enough to give a slight burn to someone else! Also, vampires, in twilight they are cold, no blood flow, but how did Edward fuck Bella? How did he get blood flowing to his pp for a boner, did he even have a boner? And semen? How would it work? Would it be gooey and thick and cold? Anyways, great story so far |
| sugarplum2498 chapter 1 . 9/8/2019 Honestly I don’t know how anyone in Fairy tail hasn’t like ravaged each other, they’re all so damn hot. I mean they probably have by now, but still! |
