Reviews for forward motion
Georgia of the Earth chapter 5 . 1/9/2015
Wow! very well written, amazing thoughts and sentences, i enjoyed every bit of it! Really, amazing stuff you do here.
Em Woman of Letters chapter 5 . 6/10/2013
I enjoy reading this a lot, very well done. I would love to see you develop the brother-sister bond of Kieren and Jem even more, but that is just me. Lovely story! Please keep writing (I don't mean to sound needy, but you are good at it)!
Eliza Varam chapter 5 . 6/9/2013
Words cannot describe how much I love this story and your writing. I'm in absolute love with this fic! All I can muster up to say is that you should update soon!
Eliza Varam chapter 4 . 6/9/2013
The life of those who rose from the dead have to be the hardest. I can only imagine what it must be like for all this unnecessary hatred and discrimination to happen to them. It gets me tears eyed just thinking about it. This is so well written, I get emotionally invested. THANKS A LOT. But really, I'm loving this!
Eliza Varam chapter 3 . 6/9/2013
This chapter was interesting. It got me thinking "Kieran may not be able to die naturally, but he is not immortal. He can die." which I don't know why I hadn't thought that before. It must be tough for Kier to deal with all those prejudices. Can't get enough of this fic!
(Also, in case you've noticed, I'm leaving a review on every chapter of this story. It is entirely too perfect to have only TWO reviews. So prepare for more)
Eliza Varam chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
This chapter was beautiful, but very sad. I always get sad when I read about things like this, but your writing made me want to read on. I literally sobbed the whole scene when Rick died and when Kieran went to Rick's house, so it's nice to know that Rick will never be forgotten. Once again, love this!
Eliza Varam chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
This is very well written, and was a pleasure to read! I'm sad that In The Flesh doesn't have a very big fandom, but what we lack in quantity, quality makes up for. Love this fic!
Carly77 chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
I really love your story! This seems to be the only story which goes beyond the first series to consider what could possibly be in store for Kieran in the future, so well done, some great and interesting ideas. Please keep updating with more chapters, I love reading them!
HowlynMad chapter 4 . 4/16/2013
Yeah, its such a wonderful allegory for discrimination. The series got a bit heavy handed for my taste (after all they DID have a right to be concerned about having zombies in their midst). I look forward to seeing what your take is...