Good story now I just have to read the original one I liked it very much despite the short length of it.

jeje este me gusto mas! fue tan... divertido!
al fin mione y harry estan juntos.
zabuza y haku tambien y con familia! kyaa! eso me enamoro!

James and Lily have to be kidding. Just because they are 'back' now, they think they have ANY right to demand ANYTHING from Haku and REALLY think shes going to automatically OBEY them just because THEY said so? They might be her parents but so what? They NEVER raised her. OTHER people raised and loved her all the years James and Lily were 'dead'. She has OTHER parents (even though they are dead but nobody in the magical world knows it yet *lol*) who she loves and respects MORE than she does the Potters who shes known LONGER than the Potters. Yet her birth parents suddenly miraculously return from the dead, and everyone expects what? That Haku give up the life and family she knows and loves to come play family with a bunch of STRANGERS who mean NOTHING to her when she already has what they are trying to offer her waiting back in Japan? Plus James and Lily seem to think they can now dictate her life now that they are back like they have some kind of right to do so. She wasn't raised their daughter, she wasn't raised to act the way they seem to want her to act, just because they share DNA doesn't automatically give the Potters the right to statt yelling at her and demanding answers to things that aren't their business to begin with as far as Haku is concerned since she doesn't consider them either her parents or her family.

Wait WHY and HOW did James and Lily die? Since they time traveled 15 years into the future thanks to Dumbledore, they are fifteen years younger than they should have been so it couldn't have been old age especially since Remus was engaged to Tonks and expecting when Lily and James died. So WHY did they die? You only just said they both died in later years, but not what of or why? *lol*

how will dumbledore react to the potters not showing up

who has saw lily wandering off
what will happen next

Hali should suggest signing the kids over into the military so that they could see what it is like

Thank You For Updating. Please Update Again Soon. What Was Danzo's Mission?

YOU PASS!
FLAWLESS VICTORY!

I can imagine Danzo wanting to see, meet, experiment/train The DURSLEYs, THE POTTERS, Padfoot and Moony. Why? because they are 'OUTSIDERS' and most of them have abilites that Danzo may like to have in ROOT.

awww...the chapters over :( oh well I can't wait for more! Great chapter!

YOU PASS!

But there are grammar and vocabulary errors in this chapter.

Punctuation seems to be o.k. though. :)

Please Update Soon.

Awwww! Haku and Zabuza really do love eachother! I wonder what will happen when the wizards get to their home and get a few glimpses of how diffrent Haku's life is ( heck you have little kids running ten times faster than they ever could) I'd love to see their faces when they see the weapons around the house and scrolls pointing out the pressure points for the body! Write soon!

If you want some ideas for the court case, why don't you have Haku bring up in court how she NEVER lived a SINGLE day with the Potters, even BEFORE their supposed deaths all those years ago unlike her brother, and demand to know why the heck should she have to leave the ONLY life and family she knows just because her STILL 20 something year old parents suddenly come back from the dead (or was it a coma as the excuse Dumbledore and the Potters gave as the reason they are suddenly back after all these years. Though unless the old man gave the two a potion that rapidly aged them to the ag they SHOULD be by now, Lily and James are a bit physically YOUNG to have been in comas for the last decade and a half like they claim) and want to claim her back into their family with no regard to the life and family she now has been living for the last fifteen years WITHOUT them in it and demand to know why she should disrupt HER life for people who basically mean NOTHING to her compared to the life and family she knows and loves, just because her birth parents 'found her', and want her back?

Plus if she has to why not have Haku an Tsunade have someone from the village pose as Haku's 'loving adopted parents' who've been raising her all these years in Japan, since her real adopted parents are dead, so the judge and jury don't try and decide to make Haku go to the Potters just because she's an underaged minor who seems to be living on her own if her supposed new family doesn't even show up at the court hearing that's supposed to decide whether or not the Potters can force her to be a part of THEIR family again. *lol*

Will Harry end up with Hermione
What will happen next