| Reviews for God Of Storms |
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   Callum Runchman chapter 24 . 7/24 No offence but this story got ruined the moment you made Perseus a Primordial. Potentially even before that this story just got to wild and confusing. Why bother with the rebellion on another planet, or the Primordial Council wanting to kill him, or him going to Asgard. This was supposed to be about him, his assenssion into godhood, these new Assassins him and Eros made (although why Eros is involved with them is beyond me) which are to be honest really cool and then the fights with the Giants, Titans and Gaia. There was also a supposed underlying romance between him and Artemis which would have been interesting as leaders of rival mortal groups that are in service to Olympus. The drama at the very beginning that involved the relationship between Hestia and Poseidon was just forgotten and Zeus was the typical asshole but there was never any repercussions which once again was a major waste. If the Author (however unlikely it it) did return to this they should fully rethink and rewrite last parts of this and link things back to the other events throughout this story |
| nightstrike5579 chapter 10 . 7/22 love the story i cant stop reading. feedback would be more frequent updates and more eros and percy action |
| PercyandIsseiloveall chapter 24 . 3/5 Please update! |
| Mace Garzandu chapter 24 . 8/22/2019 The story is so good pls update |
| Mace Garzandu chapter 23 . 8/22/2019 hel is the daughter of Odin from what I've read |
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/15/2019 Love the updates! |
| Meee chapter 24 . 1/15/2019 Plz do more! Update! |
| bob chapter 3 . 8/3/2018 vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvv vvvvvvvv vvvvvvv vvvvvv vvvvv vvvv vvv vv v |
| megacharizat chapter 4 . 7/24/2018 your point...? |
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/10/2018 Yea then that dude what was his name was all like who are you and what are you doing on my land in the palace walls?" I said trying to intimidate his voice looking at Chronos expecting him to remember who the person was. This reminds me of Shrek. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY SWAMP |
| Ryebread chapter 10 . 6/24/2018 *nerdy voice* actually *smacks lips* it's just Helen not Helena *smacks lips again* that started the Trojan war (I actually have no idea I just wanted to be a dick) |
| Entropy the Eternal Destroyer chapter 23 . 5/24/2018 It's loki's daughter. |
| king.0.fiction chapter 24 . 2/13/2018 gr8 story plz continue it |
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/23/2018 Please element and time |
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/23/2018 Time |
