You are the best writer of Rosalie Hale and Emmett McCarty Cullen. As I read this chapter I cried because you happened to take something that was good and make it 10 times better (at least in my perspective) for characters that I love dearly. I think a lot of us in the fandom who love Rosalie really understand her dislike of being a vampire but after reading this chapter and having her come to this realization about her life as a vampire and her relationship with Emmett, it was beautiful. Now I will continue reading the rest of the story and hoping that you create another version of the Em and Rose and bless this fandom again!

I thought you did a great job having this from Rosalie's point of view. I think you did a good job showing how hard it was for Rosalie and that though Nessie did help the pain is still there. I liked seeing all of it from. I got so frustrated with Edward and Jacob during the second book and I liked how you had it play out from how she was seeing things. It had to be hard for Rosalie to decide to be there for Bella especially with what it would all mean and how it would be with certain people against her. She's strong and that's what was needed. I also loved the moments between Emmett and Rosalie even though they couldn't have lots of time with everything that was going on.

I also liked seeing Emmett and Rosalie on their journey of finding the nomads and how that all went. I liked how you showed a bit more with them and I loved seeing the interactions between the characters. This was so good. I really enjoyed how you showed it all and went through it. It's a big book and you did a great job with showing the other characters but still keeping it from Rosalie's perspective.

Please look up A Rosalie Hale Story by Vanity and Patience, also Coalescence Alice and Jasper fanfiction but it starts with Singularity both brilliant as was your version of breaking dawn seen through the eyes of Rosalie, again brilliant.

Wow that was great!

Aw, I loved it! Sad it's over. I like your writing, so what should I read next ?

What a beautiful and necessary connection between brother and sister, always so at odds with each other

Oh this chapter! The tears! What beautiful writing

LOVE it! Thanks.

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A great fun chapter. Always wanted to see these missing moments where Emmett and Rosalie help teach baby sister, Bella, to fight. Emmett surely wants a little fun payback for those arm wrestling losses! And though I understand that Edward simply can't attack Bella in any way, he is missing out on the rough play between vampire mates. Bella would love that connectedness with Edward. Well, she has years and years to coax him to play. ;-)

-During all those years, it's amazing that Kate and Garrett never crossed paths before the events of Breaking Dawn. Like those two together.
-Emmett once again shows his understanding, explaining to Rose that whatever Edward knows, Aro will know as soon as he touches Edward. And Em realizes that Aro only wants certain members of the family.
-I always wondered if the non gifted siblings of the Cullen family found their super gifted sibs irritating at times. I like that Rosalie is both uncomfortable with Zafrina's illusionary world and curious.

Great chapter.

Great chapter and Emmett continues to show the wisdom lurking under the brawn and humor. I do love him, but he's all Rosalie's. LOL