Reviews for Between Worlds: The Madness of One
marvelfanenthusiastic chapter 28 . 8/25
Plot twist was good.
Why is Loki the father of Hela ? Isn't it MCU ? Why isn't she sealed and who will bring Ragnarok?
Why does Harry feel weak character in the end of the chapter? He did a miracle and why is he having self hate for saving a life ?
Anyways appreciate it.
marvelfanenthusiastic chapter 27 . 8/25
Couldn't he had given Phoenix tears for Coulson and knocked out Loki with Stupify? And why the medical expert who could do surgery for Tony couldn't use simple stitching charm episky or give blood potion while he stood there watching him bleed to death. Why didn't Harry attack Loki while he stabbed Coulson and launched the chute and escaped while he was standing right there in the same place. OMG for plot ! Why couldn't you change it like you did for Harry Potter Movies. Anyways good fic.
NobodyOwens5 chapter 18 . 5/15
you really like to jump around between chapters huh? It's a bit hard to keep up when you make such giant leaps out of nowhere.
NobodyOwens5 chapter 17 . 5/15
unsure how I feel about him resurrecting someone. I mean I get why but it makes his rage scene feel cheaper than it originally did.
NobodyOwens5 chapter 15 . 5/15
holy shit. that took a turn for the worse rather quickly.
NobodyOwens5 chapter 10 . 5/14
well that was a quick change of pace. but I like it, not a fan of first through third years and skipping all the voldemort crap opens up a whole new world to explore.
scorched halloween chapter 12 . 1/12
Did I miss a few chapters? What the hell happened here? The author skipped way too much information, to the point that the story is almost incoherent.
Guest chapter 15 . 1/9
this entire mixing of demons and angels and going back to england over and over and OVER again is just stupid ... this story is so incredibly bad i hope someone will remove it from this site ...
Azazelll chapter 46 . 10/15/2019
It sucks
Azazelll chapter 27 . 10/15/2019
That's a Dark Harry?
Otsutsuki no Yami chapter 6 . 9/11/2019
It all started great, until this end of the chapter where Harry learns that Dumbledore stole from him, and still give him money and let the remaining money in the Hogwarts vaults. Were you dropped on your head as a child, because that doesn't make any sense?

Also, the Goblin has a warning, not stealing of what not belongs to you, and I never see anywhere in any fanfiction where the Goblins take action when it happens to Harry, but when Harry steals from Voldemort followers, Harry is in deep shit.

I'm sorry, but this chapter just ruined the story for me. Throw this in a garbage bin or burn it, but your reasons are shit.
Maistzen chapter 46 . 9/9/2019
Me encanta
WhiteElfElder chapter 46 . 6/2/2019
why didn't any of the house-elves get them to safety like was with the plan? Why did Pepper not remember of Harry's hideout?
WhiteElfElder chapter 42 . 6/2/2019
Steve needs a serious wake-up call, but telling him how SHIELD is infected would only have him running off and causing more problems; I think Cap needs to go back on ice.
WhiteElfElder chapter 37 . 5/31/2019
Did that finally finish off Dolohov, or was he like Voldemort that would cast a powerful spell and flee like a true coward?
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