The gathering was kind of confusing. It is good that Sesshomaru started earlier on gathering loyalty amongst his peers. But I would have pointed out that it was a pure demon that was threatening another's family in the group. Some full demons are so full of pride and only betray each other, like some humans do too. Half-breeds are usually fighting for their lives since birth. That's not betrayal. Inuyasha has had a terrible life, what has he done so far to earn their hate. Would they hurt Inuyasha? Sesshomaru needs to ask those peers that. Would they hurt an innocent?
I wish to read more. I have notice Inuyasha's presents has made Sesshomaru a better fighter. Over time I would like to read how this makes him a better ruling Lord of the West. And the first major test, how will he protect Inuyasha against his mother!? Will his father intervene? Can't wait to read more.

U have many great unfinished stories on this n it’s honestly makes me want to cry so bad please update all of them

I have really enjoyed what you have written so far. I encourage you to continue this one. I'm looking forward to it.

Cant wait to read more.

Please update this someday too T.T Huhu. Only you can do it T.T More cuddles and loves please Waahhh

I was wondering if you'll update this story anytime soon or probably decide to discontinue it. Though I hope it's not the letterIt's a bit sad to discontinue a story. Much more sad than a story reaching its end actually.

Well, this is a turn of events; a pervy, horny Inuyasha sneakily pining after Sesshomaru! It's adorable! I really liked that Inuyasha described a foot massage as being stepped on by his beloved Master and that Sesshomaru is just innocently accepting of this. Is Inuyasha subtly trying to encourage Sesshomaru to dominate him? You know, I've recently come to think, since I'm re-watching Inuyasha episodes, that there has always been a deeply buried kindness within Sesshomaru, but as he grew older he encased his heart in ice and forgot that he was capable of such... tenderness. I really can't help but marvel at how you've shown Sesshomaru's kindness as a child. That Sesshomaru is a shrewd one even as a kid, isn't he? I'm kinda pissed that anyone would dare say Inuyasha would betray anyone, when it's a proven fact, as far as I'm concerned, that once someone gains his loyalty... he's remains that way for life! And, in case it wasn't obvious, yes, I was responding to this last chapter in parts... I mean I hadn't finished reading it before I started typing out my thoughts; I'm sorry if it's all over the place, but I couldn't help it! This fic has me totally hooked and I am hoping desperately that you'll update a new chapter really, really soon cuz I don't wanna be left wondering what's gonna happen! So, please find it in your creative spirit to write more chapters... not that I mean to be pushy, that's just how it comes across cuz I really like this fic.

I really enjoy the concept of a secret meeting of young youkai under Sesshoumaru. It seems like a diplomatic activity befitting of a cold and calculating sesshomaru but seems surly age appropriate.

Your stories are so cute, so realistic to the character and the dialogue and scenarios keep making me all mushy with all the cuteness. I'm being smothered with all this good articulate grammar and intricate sentence structures. You are my favorite fan fiction author now.

Can you update this next i really love this! But ill read whatever you update so have fun writing!:)

what thats it ? i need a other chapter ! i love it!

I absolutely love this fic, as well as, your writing style. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more.

Will this ever continue? I really like the story .

update please!

OMG! I love it so, very, much!