good chapter

You said there would be Weasley bashing, but there are no Weasleys in the story. Please make a sequel with all the left out info.
-GinnyPotter1986. (This is the name to contact me by if this review shows up as a guest review.)

I love this story when are you doing a squeal or ifyouhave already done one what is it call?

1st, let me say that I really enjoyed your story and that I found the premise original, intriguing, and refreshing.
Having said that, I would have agreed with your anon reviewer as I don't always read every A/N and didn't in this instance; therefore, I was as confused and disappointed by the 'ending/epilogue' as your anon, though I completely disagree that it was, in any wise, a 'mish mash'; quite the contrary!
I'm looking forward to reading the sequel and only wish to ask: Where is it? or How soon before you have it up and rolling?
Thank you for a truly terrific read!
MelJ

I read this story yesterday. Honestly, it was great. I loved Sylvia, and Snape teaching both of them early was awesome. Yeah, it got a little mashed up, but it was still super easy to follow. I mostly knew what was going on, and just assumed that stuff like 'who obliviated Reginald?' or 'since Harry knew of magic before hand, what house would he end up in?' would be answered in an sequel you were planning on writing. Also, I figured Dumbledore took Reginald memories since your summary said 'Dumbledore bashing' but like I said, it would be explained later. And anything that isn't explained is obviously meant to make the reader want to read another story to find out, which with me it did.
Don't think too much on it. I'm sure there's others out there that read this story that understand everything you were trying to portray within your writing.
I'm probably not making a lot of sense, but just know that I'm waiting for a sequel, and I also enjoyed your other two story beginnings with the female Harry. So if you decide to write the sequel to this, or continue those first, I'll be reading your updates. :)

Hello, this is not the original commenter, but I do have something to say. Returning hate with more hate never solves the problem. It only shows how immature you are and turns people away from your writing. Your "chapter" which was clearly intended to humiliate someone was unhelpful. To tell you the truth, I found a lot of my own thoughts in that commenters words. Your story was oftentimes confusing and the additional characters were just sort of shoved in there without much explanation. Next time try to see the truth in the criticism and respond to it with class and poise or don't respond at all or else you'll lose more readers like me with your hateful and humiliating rants.

ignore the guest. your story is great and I had already formed ideas on what you likely had planned in terms of what happened to Reginald. I do look forward to seeing where you place Harry. I'm thinking it will either be Hufflepuff or Slytherin, but I could be totally off base. No matter what you do in the sequel, I know I'll enjoy it.

or you just suck

Yikes. What a muddled up mish-mash of a story. It jumped from here to there, often leaving out key elements that would have connected the plot into a cohesive whole. Who the heck was Reginald? Who obliviated everyone? What house was Harry in?

This story isn't complete, it's abandoned. Which is sad, because the parts of it that made sense were interesting - I really liked the idea of Snape as a single father with a daughter who straddled the wizarding and muggle worlds.

Very interesting. I hope you write a sequel.

Really hope you do a sequel. Loved this.

Good job. I loved it. There is nothing you could do to improve this book plot wise in any way. I am still willing to write an alternative ending, if you want. It was amazing, though, and I'm sad it's over. All that I have to say now is: SylvArry (pronounced silvery) or if you prefer HarrVia (Which sounds like a car...) anyway, I want you to make a sequel, work on your other stories, AND post those song-fics! :D

Did Dumbledore find out about Reginald?

Interesting. It sounds like there might be hope for Dudley and Petunia but only if they get them away from Vernon.

"..and when the demon will come knocking
call for me and I will come.."

This phrase certainly fits your book, yes?
Well done