that was one of the best chapters so far, and very important when it comes to the development of the relationship between savannah and optimus. Please don't abandon us anymore, i don't think I'll survive without this story developing even further ;_; great writing!

Wait until Optimus has to deal with the PMS hormone changes!

I love this! I love all of it!

Hope to read more soon. Keep up the good work. Like how she gave her parents a good stern words. Sweet how Prowl calls her Mrs. Prime

You know from the brief scenes with Jazz, I really can see Jazz pulling off something like that

Yay! You brought them back! I sooooo hated it they died...

Great beginning. Love how she strolls right in, and makes Op feel good. I really hated the one in the 3rd movie. She was a B**ch. Also Lennox is a Major. Unless what you did was give him 2 ranks

I love it!

Yea! Congratulations on your baby and loved this chapter.

Please update, I love it

Awesome story love it please please continue loved what I read so far

and what up with her evil parents or are they even her real parents did they kidnap both of them at a young age or something and trick them into believing they were there real parents or are they just that evil or are they secretly mot human caused the day they go see if her dad is really in hospital or not then just to get kidnap by the cons has to be more to it then what it's showing I could be over thinking it

and poor Soundwave and his team so deep undercover that only jazz is aware of where his true loyalty really lay or even know that his undercover also sinced jazz is blind and has a visor will that mean Soundwave has a visor for same reason and hid it and what is Soundwave to jazz to trust him that much they are so lucky none was killed do to no one knowing they are undercover

I just found this fic. I have no idea how I have never seen it before but I needed to tell you I'm only half way through the first chapter and I HAD to scroll down to tell you this story is already perfect. I can tell already it's amazing,well written, the characters are already showing proper personalities and I'm stoked that I get to experience this story of yours. Please continue writing, you have a real amazing talent and it's a true treat to be able to enjoy a story like this one. Thank you and please keep writing.

Awww so cute they can communicate that way

My name is Savannah too! This story is amazing! I keep reading it over and over again and dying of laughter whenever an Autobots says "She stays" or "We're keeping her"

Cool. So who, exactly, is Katrina skinning alive? The parents or whoever told them where the base was in the first place?