Well... That was... Unexpected.

I, you, I don't know weather to slap you or high five you for this chapter. Its so perfect, and it burns to admit it. Good God was this a good chapter.

Of course, I think this pretty much marks the end to the fluffy introduction arc, and straight into the deep dank world of Evangelion. I can't wait to see where it goes.

So what happened to Shinji? The second chapter implies he killed himself, but the third chapter makes it sound like he's still alive. Asuka and Shinji obviously had a falling out.

What happened to "Prophecy of Evangelion?" I was all the way up to chapter 17 when the story became non existent.

Nice chapter, hope to see the action soon in the upcoming chapters and I can't wait to see what you you have planned for my OC, Tommy or Thomas/Samurai-boy as your calling him.

Also just to let you know that I've created a form for my idea that I'd PM before, so if you or anyone else reading this is interested then have a look, its in the Evangelion forms under the name Evangelion: Universal Impact.

THis is good so far. Although I have questions. What happened to Shinji? WHat is up with the Tourney if there are still monsters? Anyway, please update soon.

So far, I like it! The personalities I'm noticing from the OCs are all distinct enough as far as I can tell, and that's a good thing. You don't want them to all behave the same way, as that would be boring. Anyway, keep up the good work! :D

This is good I'm liking it so far and I wish for the rest of future chapters to be great.

I've got some questions though about the story, so here goes;

1. The Eva's from what I've got from the description are being used in the future for entertainment, how exactly? I would have though that they would be used in the protection of there individual country's seeing that Japan's gone and all knowledge would be right for the picking so that no one can take over the world or something like that.

2. Also from the description, it seem that religious nutcases are gonna bring hell or once again heaven back on earth since they think the Eva's are God's and humans have no right to degrade them, so then if I'm right then does this mean that these people are gonna somehow bring back the angels or just cause unnecessary trouble.

3. Will the original Eva cast be around this time? We know that Shinji, Asuka and Ritsuko are here but will Misato, Toji, Kensuke, HIkari and etc be coming back and if so then how will they handle the way things are going with the Eva's

4. Will stuff from the Rebuild of Evangelion be in this? Like the beast forms, the transcended Evangelion power (what Shinji did in the end of 2.0), the new characters like Mari, Sakura (Toji's sister) and the 3.0 characters who's names escape me. The advancement of technology and new angels as well from the movies.

Well that's my questions so now here a few ideas or suggestion that I think must be usefull to include in the story if you like so here it is;

1. Since Japan is gone and now replaced with the LCL ocean, do you think that the world would help restore the japanise to they home land by creating a man made island/continent for its people using advance technology to do so and also use that reason as a way to use them to supple the LCL to the future Eva's for the world.

2. Again with future tech, the Eva's should be for formidable in battle, like be about to fly like th MP Eva's or have different sensory visions for different purposes, like the AR display in the metal gear solid games.

3. The return of the Jet alone robots, seeing that many people would not want to use the Eva's considering the dangers they carry.

Well thats all I've got now so I hope that you will come back and answer my question and that my suggestions will help in any way, so best of luck and hope for an update soon.

the child of a beast and a devil, gladiator EVA units ohhhhhhhhhh shivers up and down my spine