I'm in awe of this tale you wrapped it around my heart so very well.

Wow! Beautiful ️

I loved this book but honestly chapter 3 was so intense. When he started to love all the things he hated about Luna I thought that she unintentionally brain washed him with the whole "get worse before getting better" thing. I was kinda scared of what would happen to their relationship. Glad it somehow ended up well (despite the fact that Tom is a horcrux and would maybe have to die for Voldemort to die unless they somehow found a loop hole). Anyway, I loved the story!

And you nearly killed me at the point were Luna tells about Tom wating to kill or be killed. I was drinking and nearly choked

this was absolutely lovely

So cute!

I never thought of Luna and Tom together but I enjoyed your story from beginning to end! . The only thing that I didn't get was the constantly pain Tom Riddle suffered during the story, was it because he was becoming human progressively?

Greeting from Mexico :)

Caro

I have read this like, 5 times and it's still great! Thanks for sharing!

I just realized what a missed opportunity there was; when Luna admitted to feeling sick, she could have asked Tom about certain biological things that her mother had never gotten to explain.

This was cute and quite intense... at least the healing process. Though I have to admit that I hadn't really expected Tom and Luna to fall in love... *shrugs*
Loved Katie, she's a got pers-, ehm serpent. ;)

Very fond of this story! I love the way you write Luna, can totally see her do exactly this.

I wonder about a plot point: when Voldy died, he was supposed to resurrect using one of his horcruxes. Didn't work in canon since there were none left. In this story, did he try, and fail because Diary-Tom has switched to the light side, or did it work, and actually switch Voldy to the good guys too?

Anyway, good story! Have a nice day!

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Wonderful! I love how you kept luna in character :)

I would STILL totally read a sequel. That was awesome.

This was a beautiful story, although it could have gone on for just one more chapter. This last chapter seemed rushed, especially in the ending. It would have been something to see him face off against his own self (aka Volemort). Also, I wonder why he and Harry didn't meet more; after all, it was the Chosen One who was there to help. Ah well.

It was very sweet, giggly (I was laughing throughout, except the final one, which seemed sadder than usual), and a wonderful story. Only error I could see is that in nowhere in the Harry Potter canon or in his character did Ron ever refer to someone as "chick". No even Fluer.

Also, in the last chapter, there was a few, very few errors here. I'll point 'em out:

Spelling error: "Sceptics said she had only (eye) for the new Potions Master."

Sentence error(?): "The students whispered that he did do the new Divination professor." This confused me, unless the innuendo is supposed to be vague... ;)

All in all, an excellent story. Thanks for writing it.