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   PhantomOfProcrastination chapter 1 . 7/30 Ooo this was a fun story! I love the concept, and the execution was great. The little girl is written adorably! Kudos! Tysm for sharing, and I hope you have a wonderful day/night! |
| Katlover98 chapter 1 . 10/29/2019 Wow, this fic was awesome. Poor Mary Anne I'm glad her dad found her |
| MoonPrincess919 chapter 1 . 7/11/2019 Lol, whoops. He still slipped. That was a sweet oneshot. I loved the little side story of the little girl and her dad. Really enjoyed your writing style too. Keep it up! |
| Rossmonster1 chapter 1 . 5/19/2019 Oof that ending tho OML I almost cried such a weird funny way to reveal identities, am I right? |
| Potkanka chapter 1 . 2/26/2019 Ahaha I was wondering if human Danny would slip up at the end of the story :D Perfect ending! Sure it'd be interesting to find out whether his parents took something from it or dismissed it, but it really was a great point to stop, like a cherry on top. :) But the whole story was great, the backstory of the two ghosts that was eventually revealed, so that they finally reached their happy ending - too late, and maybe too little, but they did find each other and that's a heartwarming end to the sad tale. Interactions between Phantom and his parents were also written great, their distrust but also curiosity and maybe, just maybe, they took something from it and might start to get curious about ghosts as, well, people. At least a little bit. At least to prove or disprove some of Phantom's claims, they are scientists after all, they should always strive to find the truth, not hold on to their beliefs blindly when new possibilities present themselves... Ah and Danny slipping into ghost speak - I've come across it in a few fics before and it's such a fun headcanon, I definitely enjoy that. :) |
| allman08 chapter 1 . 2/18/2019 That was good! Love the dad daughter thing you added! |
| nequam-tenshi chapter 1 . 2/6/2018 Reporting from 2018! This piece was simple and beautiful! I love the moment Mary Anne and her Daddy reunited and how Danny kept his hope. For my own interpretation, Maddie and Jack catch on to Danny's lapse of speech and still in denial about ghost being more than ectoplasmic beings for a little longer. More evidence would be needed to help them accept Danny as Phantom but they do eventually. I'm going to head over and read "Green Jacket, Red Sleeves" now! Keep up the great work! Review #55 & Favorite #509 |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2017 Why am I crying... |
| aqaws321 chapter 1 . 8/20/2017 loved it! |
| The Alien of Pluto chapter 1 . 7/25/2017 Y'know, it's weird to call a story in which a kid's parents try to kill him 'heartwarming,' but that last act was amazing! |
| Maleficus Animus chapter 1 . 11/10/2016 I KNEW he was gonna say something in ghost speach when it parents got back! And ohmygod you had to leave it THERE? This was very well written and entertaining story, i wish there was more. Thank you! |
| SneezySoul chapter 1 . 10/26/2016 xD Oh god danny you cant keep a secret can you lmao |
| Faithless-Demon chapter 1 . 10/15/2016 My God I let out a sob when I read the part with Mary Anne and cried when she was resolved. |
| Taeh chapter 1 . 10/10/2016 Yvet isn't that russian? |
| murdermewithfeelspls chapter 1 . 8/10/2016 This was exactly what i was looking for, it was a great idea and brilliantly written You should do more like this |
