The more you,Lauren, yell at hiccup like that the more of fucking ass botch you come off as

When toothless is chasing hiccup around they were having fun; when you, Lauren, yell at them/scold them for having fun you realized that come off as a major bitch right? Cunt

I'm so sorry you've gotten hate mail! :( I think your story is amazing! :)

'If he had to kill a dragon to get a girl he would just not have a girl!'

yes, go with boys instead, let out your inner gay.

Ya your good

I kind of was hoping for Ruff and Hiccup to get together seeing that in this she actually came around first, not Astrid. Loved it all the same though.

Ya know what? To Helheim with those haters! I think you are doing a marvelous job with this fic. Keep on writing!

(Helheim is the realm of those who died a dishonorable death in Viking culture. It's ruled by Hel, also known as Hella, because Marvel sucks with Norse mythology. She is the daughter of Loki, and that in itself is a whole other, much weirder, story.)

Hate to be a continuity cop but the timeline you took them from means that hiccup hasn’t been to the best yet

Omg this has got to be my fave scene so fare u did and amazing job writing it

I dunno I feel like you made hiccup to dark in this one. just my opinion

Ruffcup? Hicstrid?

Can you PLEASE do a watching race to the edge fic? I've noticed there really aren't many of them. And if you could bring Heather in, that would be awesome, I love her character.

That wasn't too bad.

Well since reviews make authors happy, here's another one! I don't care that this story was finished two years ago! Here's a review!

your one of my favorite fanfic writers, keep up the stories